Hi Alexey, thank you for the review and your kind words. Will change to "can" and publish in the next version.
Regards, Greg On Sat, Jun 30, 2018 at 8:16 AM, Alexey Melnikov <[email protected]> wrote: > Alexey Melnikov has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-18: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > This is a very readable document, so thank you for that. One small nit: > > In Section 5.6, last sentence of the first paragraph says: > > All other information MAY be determined dynamically. > > This is not correct use of RFC 2119 MAY, because it doesn't look like an > implementation choice. I suggest you change it to lowercase "may" or "can". > > >
