Hi Ben, thank you for your review and helpful comments. I propose the following updates: Abstract NEW TEXT: This document updates RFC 5880.
Introduction OLD TEXT: The Bidirectional Forwarding Detection protocol [RFC5880] specifies a method for verifying unicast connectivity between a pair of systems. This document defines a method for using BFD to provide verification of multipoint or multicast connectivity between a multipoint sender (the "head") and a set of one or more multipoint receivers (the "tails"). NEW TEXT: The Bidirectional Forwarding Detection protocol [RFC5880] specifies a method for verifying unicast connectivity between a pair of systems. This document updates [RFC5880] by defining a new method for using BFD. This new method provides verification of multipoint or multicast connectivity between a multipoint sender (the "head") and a set of one or more multipoint receivers (the "tails"). Hope these updates address your comments. Regards, Greg On Mon, Jul 2, 2018 at 6:17 PM, Ben Campbell <[email protected]> wrote: > Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-18: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Please mention the fact this updates 5880 in the abstract. Also, in the > introduction where you do mention the update, please add a sentence or two > that > give a satellite view summary of what the update actually is. > > >
