Thanks, Tom for review/comments.

Version been updated for comments. Can u please check.

https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-06.txt

Regards
V.Rajaguru
XR/BFD/PI


-----Original Message-----
From: t petch <[email protected]>
Sent: Thursday, March 30, 2023 10:02 PM
To: Rajaguru Veluchamy (rvelucha) <[email protected]>; 
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Cc: [email protected]; Rajaguru Veluchamy (rvelucha) <[email protected]>
Subject: Re: FW: New Version Notification for 
draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-05.txt

On 30/03/2023 15:09, Rajaguru Veluchamy (rvelucha) wrote:
> HI Team,
>
> Can we have WG adoption for this draft please.
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang/

Since it imports RFC8349, that must be a Normative Reference in the7950 I-D.

There is a template for Security Considerations in the YANG Guidelines RFC 
which there needs to be a good reason not to follow. Those guidelines drag in 
some more references.

A YANG module does not exist until it is registered via IANA so the IANA 
Considerations need supplying, registering the three modules, registered the 
three name spaces.

YANG would benefit from a reference, RFC7950, in the Introduction.

The WG Web URL are out of date as are the trust URL.

The BSD License reference is out of date.  (In fact, that reference was never 
valid in the first place:-(

RFC9127 gives some ideas of what is wanted.

Tom Petch



>
> Regards
> V.Rajaguru
> XR/BFD/PI
>
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> Veluchamy (rvelucha) <[email protected]<mailto:[email protected]>>
> Subject: New Version Notification for
> draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-05.txt
>
>
> A new version of I-D, draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-05.txt
> has been successfully submitted by RAJAGURU VELUCHAMY and posted to the IETF 
> repository.
>
> Name:           draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang
> Revision:       05
> Title:          YANG Data Model for Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD) 
> Hardware Offloaded Session
> Document date:  2023-03-30
> Group:          Individual Submission
> Pages:          10
> URL:            
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-05.txt
> Status:         
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang/
> Htmlized:       
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang
> Diff:           
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-05
>
> Abstract:
>     This document defines a extension YANG data model that can be used to
>     manage Hardware Offloaded Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD).
>
>     This document specially talks about BFD sessions that are offloaded
>     to hardware.
>
>     The YANG modules in this document conform to the Network Management
>     Datastore Architecture (NMDA).
>
>
>
>
> The IETF Secretariat
>
>
>

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A new version of I-D, draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-06.txt
has been successfully submitted by RAJAGURU VELUCHAMY and posted to the
IETF repository.

Name:           draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang
Revision:       06
Title:          YANG Data Model for Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD) 
Hardware Offloaded Session
Document date:  2023-04-03
Group:          Individual Submission
Pages:          11
URL:            
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-06.txt
Status:         
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang/
Htmlized:       
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang
Diff:           
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-rvelucha-bfd-offload-yang-06

Abstract:
   This document defines a extension YANG data model that can be used to
   manage Hardware Offloaded Bidirectional Forwarding Detection (BFD).

   This document specially talks about BFD sessions that are offloaded
   to hardware.

   The YANG modules in this document conform to the Network Management
   Datastore Architecture (NMDA).




The IETF Secretariat



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