Hi Reshad, thank you for your thorough review and thoughtful comments. I'll work on addressing your concerns and share proposed updates for the discussion.
Regards, Greg On Tue, Jul 16, 2024 at 7:29 PM Reshad Rahman <reshad= [email protected]> wrote: > Hi, > > Here are my comments: > > - Section 1, 2nd paragraph, states that RFC8562 defines a method for BFD > to detect unicast failures between the sender and receivers in multipoint > or multicast networks. Should that just say "detect failures" (remove > unicast) instead? > - Section 4, last paragraph. It says "this discriminator", should that be > "My Discriminator"? > - Section 4.1, last paragraph. Typo "the My Discriminator field n the" -> > "the My Discriminator field in the" > - Section 5.6 of RFC8562 on Session Establishment mentions that "Sessions > on the tail MAY be established dynamically, based on the receipt of a > multipoint BFD Control packet from the head". In this document it seems > to be implied that sessions on the BFERs (tail nodes) are established via > the bootstrapping mechanism. Whether true or not, this should be explicitly > stated one way or the other. > - Section 6.1, any concerns that the BFIR could be overwhelmed by a spike > of incoming BFD control packets? I see this is not mentioned in RFC8563. > > Finally, shouldn't LSR WG also take a look at this doc (even though Les > has already provided comments)? > > Regards, > Reshad. > > On Sunday, July 7, 2024 at 08:32:38 PM EDT, <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > Hi Reshad, > > No problem for the extension. > > Thank you very much! > > Best regards, > > Sandy > > > <http://www.zte.com.cn/> > Original > *From: *ReshadRahman <[email protected]> > *To: *[email protected] <[email protected]>;[email protected] <[email protected]>; > 张征00007940; > *Date: *2024年07月08日 03:56 > *Subject: **Re: Call for review for draft-ietf-bier-bfd* > Hi, > > Thanks Sandy for forwarding the document to the BFD WG. > > I was planning to review this document but work and a work-trip got in the > way. Could we please get a 1-week extension? > > BFD WG, please review this document. > > Regards, > Reshad. > > > On Tuesday, June 25, 2024 at 03:26:28 AM EDT, <[email protected]> > wrote: > > > Hi, > > The draft-ietf-bier-bfd passed last call in BIER WG. > > We'd like to get more review in BFD WG: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bier-bfd/ > > Comments and suggestion welcomed, please send your comments before 9th, > July. > > > And please volunteer if you want to be the shepherd of this draft. > > Thank you! > > Best regards, > > Sandy > > > > > _______________________________________________ > BIER mailing list -- [email protected] > To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected] >
