Mike,

Many thanks for your review and very useful comments.
We agree with them and we’ll obviously take them into account in the next 
revision.
Please see 2 comments inline. [Bruno]


From: rtgwg [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Mike Shand
Sent: Thursday, May 07, 2015 12:15 PM
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Subject: Mail regarding draft-decraene-rtgwg-backoff-algo

I have been assigned as Routing Directorate QA reviewer for this document.
The following web page contains a briefing on the QA process.
​https://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDirDocQa
The document is clear and concise and succinctly describes a proposed 
standardised SPF backoff algorithm.  This seems a useful step forward. The 
algorithm is not overly complex.
While suggested values for the various parameters are given, what is not clear 
to me is whether the intention is that these (or at least an agreed set) of 
these values are intended to be standardised as well as the algorithm. It would 
seem that different values might be suitable for different networks, but 
presumably the intention is that all the routers in a particular network SHOULD 
have the same values. Some discussion of this would be helpful.
[Bruno] Good point. Acee had already pointed this to me and my local version 
has a new paragraph about this. The paragraph is a bit too long to copy past 
here, but I think we are in sync. In short:
- “This document does not propose default values for the parameters because 
these values are expected to be context dependent. Implementations are free to 
propose their own default values.”
- timers must be configurable.
- the section discuss some aspects that should be taken into account when 
setting such values.
I assume that "rib computation time" is the time that a RIB computation is to 
be (or was) STARTED? Obviously the FIB will not be updated for some time after 
this, in some cases for quite a long time after this! Does this delay need to 
be taken into account?
[Bruno] Definitely a valid question. So far the document takes the simple 
option of only considering SPF delay and not considering FIB update. That’s 
much simpler, especially considering that we are not seeking to remove all 
micro-loops, but trying to avoid unnecessary contributions due to different SPF 
delays.
Note that the timers being configurable, one could (try to) play with different 
timer value to (partially) take into account different in FIB updates durations.

Thanks again,
/Bruno
I appreciate that in many cases it is difficult to ascertain reliably exactly 
when a FIB update has been completed.
In reading the document I spotted the following nits.
Intro para 3
"some back-off algorithm have"
presumably algorithms

and
"to enforce that all routers
   triggers their SPF
presumably trigger

Bottom of page 3
"SPF_DELAY back to INITAL_WAIT. e.g. 5 seconds."
obviously should be INITIAL_WAIT

4. Principle of SPG algorithm
3rd para
"and the while
   waiting for its stability,"
"and while waiting" would be better.

6 Impact on micro-loops
"FIB are installed"
The FIB is installed
or
FIBs are installed



Mike

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