Joel Jaeggli has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-rtgwg-lfa-manageability-09: No Objection

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Ron Bonica's Opsdir review.

Folks,

I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. 
These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational
aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call
may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review.  Document editors
and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.

This document is on the Standards Track. It provides operational feedback
on LFA, highlights some limitations, and proposes a set of refinements to
address those limitations.  It also proposes required management
specifications.

The document is well-written and nearly ready for publication.

Major Issues
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None

Minor Issues
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- Please run this document through the NIT checker and address the NITS

- I am not sure how the sitting IESG feels about the use of lowercase
"must", "should" and "may". You may want to check this before the IESG
review.


Ron Bonica

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example that I would cite as good to all caps

6.1
...


   o  Per prefixes: prefix protection SHOULD have a better priority
      compared to interface protection.  This means that if a specific
      prefix must be protected due to a configuration request, LFA must
      be computed and installed for this prefix even if the primary
      outgoing interface is not configured for protection.

LFA MUST

since it's a requirement

in most other cases I see a lower cast must what is being described is
the logic that draws you to a conclusion, and those are ok.


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