Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-06: No Objection

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Nit in section 9:
You should probably not talk about 'our' solution or mechanism in an RFC:
s/our/this/ or s/our X/the X described in this document/
This appears multiple times in section 9.


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