Roni, thanks for your review. Stephane, thanks for agreeing to make fixes. I have entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Sep 27, 2017, at 9:09 AM, [email protected] wrote: > > Thanks I will fix it in the next revision > > > -----Original Message----- > From: Roni Even [mailto:[email protected]] > Sent: Wednesday, September 27, 2017 11:00 > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; [email protected] > Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-06 > > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-?? > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review Date: 2017-09-27 > IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-04 > IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-12 > > Summary: > The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > 1. Abbreviation like RIB and FIB are not expanded 2. In section 9.1 "more > simple" should be "simpler" > 3. In section 9.1 " does not enough provide enough bandwidth" to " does not > provide enough bandwidth" 4. In section 9.2 "a mechanism where the > convergence of the network upon a topology change is made ordered to prevent > transient forwarding loops" is difficult to read maybe "a mechanism where > the convergence of the network upon a topology change is ordered in order to > prevent transient forwarding loops" > > > > _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ > > Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations > confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc > pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu > ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler > a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages > electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, > Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou > falsifie. Merci. > > This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged > information that may be protected by law; > they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. > If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete > this message and its attachments. > As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been > modified, changed or falsified. > Thank you. > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg
