On 10/11/17 4:18 AM, [email protected] wrote:
Hi Adam,
Thanks for your review.
Some comments inline
Your proposals all look good to me. One additional comment, below.
Section 4 begins:
This document defines a two-step convergence initiated by the router
detecting a failure and advertising the topological changes in the
IGP. This introduces a delay between the convergence of the local
router and the network wide convergence.
This reads backwards to me. With this technique, the network converges first,
followed by an introduced delay, followed by router convergence. Right?
[SLI] The network converges first, then the local router thanks to the
introduced local delay.
Yes, so I would suggest rephrasing the above as:
This document defines a two-step convergence initiated by the router
detecting a failure and advertising the topological changes in the
IGP. This introduces a delay between network-wide convergence and
the convergence of the local router.
/a
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