Reviewer: Rich Salz Review result: Ready I did this review for the Security Directorate (SECDIR) to help the Security AD's.
This document is ready. Section 1.2 gives an augmented diagram syntax; is that common? Should it be added to "yang proper"? The security considerations is short and to the point. This document describes a data model, so the security considerations properly point call out requirements on any transport mechanism used. Calling out particularly vulnerable nodes is good practice. Perhaps add a sentence saying that "implemented should review all the nodes for security concerns" might be useful. _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg
