Mirja, Thanks for your review and comments. Sorry for the 1 week delay. Please see inline [Bruno]
> -----Original Message----- > From: rtgwg [mailto:rtgwg-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Mirja Kühlewind > Sent: Monday, February 19, 2018 4:36 PM > > Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-rtgwg-backoff-algo-07: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtgwg-backoff-algo/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > 1) Probably an editorial issue: "... SPF_DELAY to be restored to > INITIAL_SPF_DELAY. e.g., 3 seconds." 3 seconds? The previous text says > INITIAL_SPF_DELAY should be very short, e.g. 0 milliseconds...? [Bruno] Text is: "3. Definitions and parameters" [...] "HOLDDOWN_INTERVAL: The time required with no received IGP events before considering the IGP to be stable again and allowing the SPF_DELAY to be restored to INITIAL_SPF_DELAY. e.g., 3 seconds." First sentence is the definition of the HOLDDOWN_INTERVAL. Second sentence "e.g., 3 seconds." is an example of a typical value. In think that the example is useful for the reader to get the order of magnitude of each timers. Also, this presentation is aligned with the definition of other parameters. I'm not seeing any editorial issue per see, however I can see that a reader may associate the example value with the closest timer name. I could propose the following editorial change, if it works for everyone: OLD: HOLDDOWN_INTERVAL: The time required with no received IGP events before considering the IGP to be stable again and allowing the SPF_DELAY to be restored to INITIAL_SPF_DELAY. e.g., 3 seconds. The HOLDDOWN_INTERVAL MUST be defaulted or configured to be longer than the TIME_TO_LEARN_INTERVAL. NEW: HOLDDOWN_INTERVAL: The time required with no received IGP events before considering the IGP to be stable again and allowing the SPF_DELAY to be restored to INITIAL_SPF_DELAY. e.g. a HOLDDOWN_INTERVAL of 3 seconds. The HOLDDOWN_INTERVAL MUST be defaulted or configured to be longer than the TIME_TO_LEARN_INTERVAL. > 2) Also editorial: it would be helpful to show the state diagram right at the > beginning. [Bruno] I'm not sure what you mean by "beginning". It can't be before §3 which defines the definitions. Nor before §4 which present the high level principles of the algorithm. Then we have the §5 defining the FSM. - Currently the state diagram is in §"5.3 States transition" - I don't think we can move it before the presentation of the states in §"5.1. States" - I could propose to move the diagram from §5.3 to 5.2. I'll apply the 2 proposed changes in the latest revision (-08) but please feel free to further comment / propose alternative text. Thanks, Regards, --Bruno > > _______________________________________________ > rtgwg mailing list > rtgwg@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration, Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme ou falsifie. Merci. This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged information that may be protected by law; they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation. If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and delete this message and its attachments. As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have been modified, changed or falsified. Thank you. _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list rtgwg@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg
