Hi Reshad,

     Sorry for delay.
     We have addressed all your comments except point 2. If we use the type ' 
ieee: vlanid ', we should import the corresponding YANG module which contains 
this type.
     We have found that ' ieee-types ' module has been emerged in the 
01-version of draft-ietf-netmod-yang-types-01. However, it was deleted in the 
final version of RFC 6021.
      If we use the import like:

       import ietf-ieee-types {
    prefix ieee;

The ARP YANG module cannot run correctly on the website 
http://www.yangvalidator.com/validator,  and has the following error:
error: module "ietf-ieee-types" not found in search path

If you have some good suggestions, pls help us to improve the draft. Thanks 
very much.


-----Original Message-----
From: Reshad Rahman (rrahman) [mailto:rrah...@cisco.com] 
Sent: Tuesday, March 20, 2018 10:29 PM
To: dingxiaojian (A) <dingxiaoji...@huawei.com>; rtgwg@ietf.org
Subject: Re: New Version Notification for draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt

Hi Xiaojian,

Some comments:
- The uint64 counters should be changed to yang:counter64.
- For vlanid use ieee:vlanid instead of uint16
- You have "container global-static-table" which contains " list static-entry". 
Typically this is done by having the container being in plural form and the 
list in singular form, e.g. "container static-entries" and "list static-entry".
- Use yang-version 1.1 in ARP YANG module also
- Add reference statements for imports (see 6087bis) in both modules
- The revision statement "2017-10-18" doesn't match the date: 2018-01-27
- Add a note to RFC Editor to replace RFC XXX 


´╗┐On 2018-02-28, 8:58 AM, "rtgwg on behalf of dingxiaojian (A)" 
<rtgwg-boun...@ietf.org on behalf of dingxiaoji...@huawei.com> wrote:

    Hi all,
    -01 version addresses the comments received from WG mail list reviews .
    More comments are very welcomed. Thanks.
    Best regards,
    -----Original Message-----
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    To: Zhengfeng (Habby) <habby.zh...@huawei.com>; Robert Wilton 
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    Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt
    A new version of I-D, draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt
    has been successfully submitted by Xiaojian Ding and posted to the IETF 
    Name:               draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model
    Revision:   01
    Title:              YANG Data Model for ARP
    Document date:      2018-02-27
    Group:              Individual Submission
    Pages:              17
       This document defines a specification of one YANG module and one
       submodule.  Together they form the Address Resolution Protocol (ARP)
       data model that performs as a guideline for configuring ARP
       capabilities on a system.  It is intended these modules be used by
       service providers who manipulate devices from different vendors in a
       standard way.
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