Hi Reshad,
Sorry for delay.
We have addressed all your comments except point 2. If we use the type '
ieee: vlanid ', we should import the corresponding YANG module which contains
this type.
We have found that ' ieee-types ' module has been emerged in the
01-version of draft-ietf-netmod-yang-types-01. However, it was deleted in the
final version of RFC 6021.
If we use the import like:
import ietf-ieee-types {
prefix ieee;
}
The ARP YANG module cannot run correctly on the website
http://www.yangvalidator.com/validator, and has the following error:
error: module "ietf-ieee-types" not found in search path
If you have some good suggestions, pls help us to improve the draft. Thanks
very much.
Xiaojian
-----Original Message-----
From: Reshad Rahman (rrahman) [mailto:[email protected]]
Sent: Tuesday, March 20, 2018 10:29 PM
To: dingxiaojian (A) <[email protected]>; [email protected]
Subject: Re: New Version Notification for draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt
Hi Xiaojian,
Some comments:
- The uint64 counters should be changed to yang:counter64.
- For vlanid use ieee:vlanid instead of uint16
- You have "container global-static-table" which contains " list static-entry".
Typically this is done by having the container being in plural form and the
list in singular form, e.g. "container static-entries" and "list static-entry".
- Use yang-version 1.1 in ARP YANG module also
- Add reference statements for imports (see 6087bis) in both modules
- The revision statement "2017-10-18" doesn't match the date: 2018-01-27
- Add a note to RFC Editor to replace RFC XXX
Regards,
Reshad.
On 2018-02-28, 8:58 AM, "rtgwg on behalf of dingxiaojian (A)"
<[email protected] on behalf of [email protected]> wrote:
Hi all,
-01 version addresses the comments received from WG mail list reviews .
More comments are very welcomed. Thanks.
Best regards,
Xiaojian
-----Original Message-----
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Sent: Wednesday, February 28, 2018 4:15 PM
To: Zhengfeng (Habby) <[email protected]>; Robert Wilton
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Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt
A new version of I-D, draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt
has been successfully submitted by Xiaojian Ding and posted to the IETF
repository.
Name: draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model
Revision: 01
Title: YANG Data Model for ARP
Document date: 2018-02-27
Group: Individual Submission
Pages: 17
URL:
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ding-rtgwg-arp-yang-model-01.txt
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Abstract:
This document defines a specification of one YANG module and one
submodule. Together they form the Address Resolution Protocol (ARP)
data model that performs as a guideline for configuring ARP
capabilities on a system. It is intended these modules be used by
service providers who manipulate devices from different vendors in a
standard way.
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