Hello,
I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft.
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Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it
would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF
Last Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through
discussion or by updating the draft.
Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-spf-uloop-pb-statement-08.txt
Reviewer: Tomonori Takeda
Review Date: Dec. 17th, 2018
IETF LC End Date: Dec. 18th, 2018
Intended Status: Informational
Summary:
This document is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
should be considered prior to publication.
Comments:
This document analyzes the impact of SPF delay algorithm and associated
triggers on IGP micro-loops. This document presents useful information
on how mixing strategies may lead to longer micro-loops. The document is
well organized, easy to read.
Major Issues:
None
Minor Issues:
None
Nits:
1) Section 2 says
"That part may be the main part for the first iteration but is not for
subsequent IGP events. In addition, this part is very implementation
specific and difficult/impossible to standardize, while the SPF delay
algorithm may be standardized."
It would be better to explain what "That part" and "this part" mean.
I guess the text should look like:
"The time to update the FIB may be the main part for the first
iteration of IGP event but is not for subsequent IGP events.
In addition, the time to update the FIB is very implementation
specific and difficult/impossible to standardize, while the SPF delay
algorithm may be standardized."
Thanks,
Tomonori Takeda
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