Hi Lars, Thanks for you comments.
> On May 25, 2023, at 2:19 AM, Lars Eggert via Datatracker <[email protected]> > wrote: > > Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-20: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to > https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > # GEN AD review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-18 > > CC @larseggert > > ## Comments > > ### Boilerplate > > This document does not use RFC2119 keywords, but contains the RFC8174 > boilerplate. I’ve removed these in the -21 version. > > ### Inclusive language > > Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see > https://www.rfc-editor.org/part2/#inclusive_language for background and more > guidance: > > * Term `master`; alternatives might be `active`, `central`, `initiator`, > `leader`, `main`, `orchestrator`, `parent`, `primary`, `server` Good catch - the examples including “ipv4-master” and “ipv6-master” were migrated from RFC 8349 and enhanced with the new YANG data nodes. I’ve changed these to “ipv4-primary” and “ipv6-master” in the -21 version. Thanks, Acee > > ## Notes > > This review is in the ["IETF Comments" Markdown format][ICMF], You can use the > [`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into > individual GitHub issues. Review generated by the [`ietf-reviewtool`][IRT]. > > [ICMF]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments/blob/main/format.md > [ICT]: https://github.com/mnot/ietf-comments > [IRT]: https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool > > > _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg
