Hi, I have just become aware of the above draft (version 6), and have noticed the following typographical errors:
5.2.8 - A closing bracket is missing after "refer to Section 5". 8.2.4. "(FF02:1)" should be "(FF02::1)" and "(FF02:2)" should be "(FF02::2)". In 5.2.8, it is unclear to me what "refer to Section 5" is intended to convey. The paragraph itself is already part of Section 5, so the reference is unhelpful. The only possible reference that I can see could be relevant would be a reference to Section 5.1, but that doesn't seem helpful to me. With regards, Quentin Armitage _______________________________________________ rtgwg mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/rtgwg
