Thanks for the review and the comments. Excuse me for prolonged delay in response. Please find my response inline. If you agree with the resolution, I will update the draft accordingly.
Regards, Aseem Get Outlook for Mac <https://aka.ms/GetOutlookForMac> From: Zaheduzzaman Sarker via Datatracker <[email protected]> Date: Monday, October 27, 2025 at 7:29 AM To: [email protected] <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>, [email protected] <[email protected]> Subject: draft-ietf-rtgwg-qos-model-13 early Intdir review Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-qos-model Title: YANG Models for Quality of Service (QoS) in IP networks Reviewer: Zaheduzzaman Sarker Review result: Ready with Nits The draft defines a set of YANG models for managing Quality of Service (QoS) in IP networks, particularly those based on DiffServ (Differentiated Services). It didn't flag anything particular to INTAREA. That said, I have some comments which I believe will add more clarity to the document if addressed - * It says - The DSCP markings are applied by upstream node or by the edge router on entry to the DiffServ network. Does this mean PHB according to the DSCP marking is applied? if yes, can we say that? >> I have modified the wording to below text: "The DSCP markings are applied by upstream node or by the edge router on entry to the DiffServ network. The traffic streams are differentiated based on DiffServ Code Points (DSCP) carried in the IP header of each packet and per-hop-behavior according to the DSCP marking is applied." * Please consult with the RFC-editor's Abbreviations list for the well known abbreviations which probably do not need expansion in the section 1.3. >> Sure, I will follow up. * Section 2: the figure has "Target", can it be clear that it means Target? It can be interface or policy, right? >> The below text can be found at the end of section 2: "The target is assumed to be interface but the groupings can be used for any other target type where QoS policy is applied." * Section 3: - If classifier does not provide filters, where do we get them from for the " grouping filters”? >> classifier is part of the base framework. "grouping filters" is provided by >> diffserv model.
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