Hi Joel, 

We just submitted a new revision (-05) to address your below comments. We'd 
appreciate your review of the updates and see if you are OK with the text. 
Thanks. 

HTMLized: 
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-dong-fantel-problem-statement
Diff:     
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-dong-fantel-problem-statement-05

Best regards,
Jie (on behalf of coauthors)

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Joel Halpern <[email protected]>
> Sent: Saturday, January 17, 2026 1:23 AM
> To: Dongjie (Jimmy) <[email protected]>; Yingzhen Qu
> <[email protected]>; [email protected]; [email protected]
> Subject: Re: [fantel] Re: [rtgwg] Re: Call for adoption:
> draft-dong-fantel-problem-statement-03 (Ends 2026-01-30)
> 
> If the focus is on notifications, and not on the responses to notifications, 
> then
> issues such as very-low-loss delivery should be described as potential 
> results,
> not as goals of the work.
> 
> Separately, I think it is a mistake to conflate the intra-data center, 
> one-hop-wan,
> and arbitrary communication path cases.  The time and processing
> constraints for these cases are VERY different, and likely useful notification
> approaches are likely to be different (and some cases may not be amenable to
> significant improvement).  As such, at the very least I would expect
> identification of problem spaces with different characteristics, and possibly
> explicit statements that they should be addressed with different techniques.
> 
> Yours,
> 
> Joel
> 
> On 1/15/2026 10:13 PM, Dongjie (Jimmy) wrote:
> > Hi Joel,
> >
> > Many thanks to your review and clarification questions. Please see replies
> inline:
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Joel Halpern <[email protected]>
> > Sent: Friday, January 16, 2026 5:09 AM
> > To: Yingzhen Qu <[email protected]>; [email protected]; [email protected]
> > Subject: [rtgwg] Re: [fantel] Call for adoption:
> draft-dong-fantel-problem-statement-03 (Ends 2026-01-30)
> >
> > I have several basic concerns with the draft.
> >
> > 1) The draft starts by asserting that there is a need for lossless traffic
> delivery.  It is possible you actually mean lossless.  In which case I 
> consider
> the target impossible for any general use network.  It is mor elikely you mean
> very low loss (e.g 1 in 10^6 packet loss over any 1 minute time period.)  If 
> so,
> you need to state that and not refer to "lossless".
> >
> > [Jie] Thanks for pointing this out. "Lossless" used in the abstract and the
> introduction section refers to the expectation of some applications to the
> network. This is similar to the target of Detnet on "zero congestion loss". 
> For
> the network it is difficult to guarantee lossless in all scenarios and 
> situations,
> what it network can do is to minimize packet loss and control the loss rate
> below certain level (as you suggested), so that it does not impact the
> performance of the applications. We can clarify this further in next revision,
> and consider to use other word to avoid confusion.
> >
> >
> > 2) Unless I missed it, other than in terms of examples the draft does not
> seem to state whether it wants to solve an intra-data-center problem (a
> interesting, important, and solvable problem), one hop wide are anetwork
> ( aproblem where it may be possible to do something, depending upon the link
> delay, srbitrary but special constructed wide area interconnects (demonstrated
> to be addressable by throwing money at the problem), or arbitrary multi-use,
> multi-hop wide area networks.  The demands and difficulties of these
> different cases are different.
> >
> > [Jie] The network scenarios you listed above are considered as potential use
> cases of the fast notification mechanism. I agree there are differences in 
> these
> cases, while in general fast notification would help to enable prompt and
> precise action upon network condition changes. Thus it is not limited to any
> specific network scenario.
> >
> >
> > 3) There is also an assertion that "faster" responsiveness to issues is
> needed.   Without some quantification of what kind of speed is needed, I do
> not see how this claim can be evaluated, nor how solutions can be considered.
> >
> > [Jie] Based on the discussion during the BoF and in RTGWG, in recent
> revisions some text was added to the introduction and section 3 to quantify
> the expected speed of fast notification (in the order of sub-milliseconds or
> milliseconds), and why it is considered faster than existing mechanisms.
> >
> >
> > Net: While I see  a nice sketch of  a topic for investigation, I do not see
> enough clarity for adoption.
> >
> > [Jie] Hope the above can answer your clarification questions.
> >
> > [Jie] BTW, after the submission of the -03 version, we asked the WG to give
> opinion on which term to use for this work. "Fantel" was previously used for
> the BoF and in several drafts following that, while according to the 
> discussion
> and feedbacks, we would focus on the notification part and not limit the
> actions to TE and load balancing. Thus another term "FANN" was proposed for
> "FAst Network Notification". We'd appreciate your opinion on which term is
> better, or you are welcome to propose other terms. Thanks.
> >
> > Bes regards,
> > Jie
> >
> >
> > Yours,
> >
> > Joel
> >
> > On 1/15/2026 2:12 PM, Yingzhen Qu via Datatracker wrote:
> >> This message starts a rtgwg WG Call for Adoption of:
> >> draft-dong-fantel-problem-statement-03
> >>
> >> This Working Group Call for Adoption ends on 2026-01-30
> >>
> >> Abstract:
> >>      Modern networks require adaptive traffic manipulation including
> >>      Traffic Engineering (TE), load balancing, flow control, and
> >>      protection, to support high-throughput, low-latency, and lossless
> >>      applications such as Artificial Intelligence (AI) /Machine Learning
> >>      (ML) training and real-time services.  A good and timely
> >>      understanding of network operational status, such as congestion and
> >>      failures, can help to improve network utilization, enable the
> >>      selection of paths with reduced latency, and enable faster response
> >>      to critical events.  This document describes the existing problems
> >>      and why a new set of fast network notification solutions are needed.
> >>
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