[rtgwg] Shepherd reveiw comments for draft-ietf-rtgwg-vrrp-rfc8347bis-14

[Yingzhen Qu]

Hi authors,

Thanks for working on this document.

Here are my shepherd review comments:
* These two references should be updated:
"
  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 3768 (Obsoleted by RFC 5798)

  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 6991 (Obsoleted by RFC 9911)
"

* In the "IANA Considersations", the YANG module name should be an update
to the existing name to reference this document.

Nits:
At the beginning of the introduction, we don't need to reference RFC 6020.

Thanks,
Yingzhen

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