Thanks, just went through your remarks, very good comments. I used about 90% of them ...
On Jun 4, 8:19 pm, David Harvey <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > On the main page, why not put the mission *first*, and then > afterwards put "Sage is..." This "first page first sentence problem" will never be solved. Personally, I finally know how I like it, but I'm open for any input. IMHO the definition is more important and don't forget, overemphasizing an already very strong statement looks "amateurish" ;) > > Also, under "Library", I don't know what "works" means. This was already a problem mentioned somewhere else. Very interesting. I looked it up in a dictionary and it is the correct translation. Maybe it is used differently? Or is the word "workings" better? You used it in "...and the previous (and ongoing) work of many authors of included components". I think, in German it has a broader meaning but is still the same word. What I mean is written (digital) text that has been done for, about and with Sage excluding development (howto's, papers, examples, ...) - > that ends up in a collection, called library. H --~--~---------~--~----~------------~-------~--~----~ To post to this group, send email to [email protected] To unsubscribe from this group, send email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/sage-devel URLs: http://www.sagemath.org -~----------~----~----~----~------~----~------~--~---
