#19897: Rewriting introductory thematic tutorial on coding theory
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Reporter: dlucas | Owner:
Type: enhancement | Status: needs_review
Priority: major | Milestone: sage-7.1
Component: coding theory | Resolution:
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Authors: David Lucas | Reviewers:
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Comment (by saraedum):
Looks very good to me. Some minor technical issues.
* Typo in `Lets us now go a bit more into details on specific points.`
* `The algorithms behind decoder work differently for each decoder:`
sounds strange. Did you mean `Decoder` or `decoders`?
* `to compare decoders which work the same`. Did you mean something like
`decoders which share properties`?
* `In Section II, we briefly introduced the new Channel objects as a new
way to put errors in a word.`. I think you should remove both occurences
of `new`. Channels are maybe new right now but they won't be anymore at
some point.
* `We also introduced a useful shortcut for`. Was that "introduced" in the
document? Did you mean "have"?
Have you checked that this looks alright in the pdf output? I think you
might have to escape `...` somehow or maybe you can just use a unicode
`…`. Same goes for the dashes you use; maybe they are alright but you
might want to double check.
Other than that, feel free to set this to "positive review" once you
adressed the above.
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