Author: vance
Date: 2005-01-21 01:46:03 +0000 (Fri, 21 Jan 2005)
New Revision: 330

WebSVN: 
http://websvn.samba.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi?view=rev&root=samba-docs&rev=330

Log:
Since English is my first language, I suppose I qualify for "someone more
fluent in english." (note, though, that none of these corrections are 
grammatically necessary, but they do make it flow a little more naturally.)

Vance


Modified:
   trunk/manpages/pam_winbind.8.xml


Changeset:
Modified: trunk/manpages/pam_winbind.8.xml
===================================================================
--- trunk/manpages/pam_winbind.8.xml    2005-01-20 22:47:09 UTC (rev 329)
+++ trunk/manpages/pam_winbind.8.xml    2005-01-21 01:46:03 UTC (rev 330)
@@ -30,12 +30,12 @@
 <refsect1>
        <title>OPTIONS</title>
        <para>
-               pam_winbind does support several options:
+               pam_winbind supports several options:
                <variablelist>
 
                <varlistentry>
                <term>debug</term>
-               <listitem><para>Gives debugging-output to 
syslog.</para></listitem>
+               <listitem><para>Gives debugging output to 
syslog.</para></listitem>
                </varlistentry>
 
                <varlistentry>
@@ -60,9 +60,9 @@
                <varlistentry>
                <term>use_first_pass</term>
                <listitem><para>
-               The default is, that pam_winbind tries to get the
-               authentication token from a previous module. If no token is 
available, the user
-               is asked for the old password. With this option, pam_winbind 
aborts with an
+               By default, that pam_winbind tries to get the
+               authentication token from a previous module. If no token is 
available it asks the user
+               for the old password. With this option, pam_winbind aborts with 
an
                error if no authentication token from a previous module is 
available.
                </para></listitem>
                </varlistentry>
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
                <term>use_authtok</term>
                <listitem><para>
                Set the new password to the one provided by the previously
-               stacked password module. If this option is not set, pam_winbind 
would ask the
+               stacked password module. If this option is not set pam_winbind 
will ask the
                user for the new password.
                </para></listitem>
                </varlistentry>

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