Joshua Kr?mer wrote: > Hello all! > > For school, I'm asked to do the layout for a kind of ?yearbook? (with > presentation of students, teachers, classes, articles about excursions etc.) > > The book's mottoe is (german): ?Heute HUGO, morgen BOSS?, hinting > to the well-known ?HUGO BOSS? brand. > > You can find my result here: > http://www.pc-schachtel.de/sonstiges/Abi5.pdf > > Note: the photography is a placeholder ;) > > The box around the page number should look like one of those pieces in > clothes indicating the size. > > I hope some of you can give me some tipps, hints or advices how to > improve the layout! > > Hallo Joshua,
Overall, very nice. I'm not one of the people who post to the list who is a professional in layout or design, but it has a good balance in general. The only significant suggestion I have has to do the the relationship between the body text on page two and the address footnote. I don't like that empty space just above it. It looks like something is missing, and perhaps there is, since that doesn't seem to be a complete sentence just above it. A minor issue is that the two inner margins on pages 2 and 3 are not the same. Nonetheless, an attractive piece of work. It looks like they picked the right person to do this. Greg
