On Feb 11, 2010, at 12:53 , Patrick Crowley wrote:
> I'm relaunching one of my web apps tomorrow.
>
> If you get a second, please check it out. Your feedback is welcome!
>
> http://icalshare.heroku.com/
It looks great, Patrick.
But if I might say: the home page doesn't really tell me what it does, why I
need it, or why I should care.
Basically, "has thousands of holiday and sports calendars" is too vague. I
presume that what it does is let me subscribe to these things in my calendaring
app. I suggest something like:
<h1>Get holiday and sports calendars on your desktop in seconds.</h1>
<h2>Subscribed calendars show up automatically in Outlook, iCal, Google
Calendar and other organizer programs</h2>
Maybe at the bottom of the screen little stick figures thinking "Gosh, I wish I
knew when my team was playing in town", and "What's the easiest way to track
Chinese holidays?", etc.
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