Bug#380093: Debian branding

2006-07-30 Thread Colin Watson
On Fri, Jul 28, 2006 at 02:49:53PM +0300, Eddy Petrisor wrote:
 Colin Watson wrote:
  It would be nice if this text were more generic so that derived
  distributions didn't have to mess with it. How about only the core of
  your new system is installed and Software selection?
 
 May I suggest removing your from your proposed text? It seems more
 professional to me.

Simply removing your from the text above would produce an
ungrammatical sentence. I disagree anyway - your is used all over the
place in d-i strings and doesn't sound at all unprofessional to me. It's
reasonable to avoid anthropomorphising the computer, but there's nothing
wrong with directly addressing the user.

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Bug#380093: Debian branding

2006-07-30 Thread Eddy Petrişor

On 30/07/06, Colin Watson [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

On Fri, Jul 28, 2006 at 02:49:53PM +0300, Eddy Petrisor wrote:
 Colin Watson wrote:
  It would be nice if this text were more generic so that derived
  distributions didn't have to mess with it. How about only the core of
  your new system is installed and Software selection?

 May I suggest removing your from your proposed text? It seems more
 professional to me.

Simply removing your from the text above would produce an
ungrammatical sentence. I disagree anyway - your is used all over the

Indeed, I should have said replace it with 'the' , but Joey got it
right IMHO  :)


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Bug#380093: Debian branding

2006-07-29 Thread Christian Perrier
Quoting Joey Hess ([EMAIL PROTECTED]):
 Eddy Petrisor wrote:
  May I suggest removing your from your proposed text? It seems more
  professional to me.
 
  At the moment, only the core of the system is installed. To tune the
  system to your needs, you can choose to install one or more of the
  following predefined collections of software.
 
 I think I removed the first your already because it scanned better.


Seems fine by me. I suggest that thius tasksel does not migrate to
testing (ie not used for beta3) because the change obviously breaks
all translations and will make tasksel untranslated for nearly all
languages (except those that will cope with the change very quickly).



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Bug#380093: Debian branding

2006-07-28 Thread Eddy Petrisor
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Colin Watson wrote:
 It would be nice if this text were more generic so that derived
 distributions didn't have to mess with it. How about only the core of
 your new system is installed and Software selection?

May I suggest removing your from your proposed text? It seems more
professional to me.

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Regards,
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Bug#380093: Debian branding

2006-07-28 Thread Geert Stappers
On Fri, Jul 28, 2006 at 02:49:53PM +0300, Eddy Petrisor wrote:
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 Colin Watson wrote:
  It would be nice if this text were more generic so that derived
  distributions didn't have to mess with it. How about only the core of
  your new system is installed and Software selection?
 
 May I suggest removing your from your proposed text? It seems more
 professional to me.

I prefer the your included, it is more personal (user-friendly)

GSt


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Bug#380093: Debian branding

2006-07-28 Thread Joey Hess
Eddy Petrisor wrote:
 May I suggest removing your from your proposed text? It seems more
 professional to me.

 At the moment, only the core of the system is installed. To tune the
 system to your needs, you can choose to install one or more of the
 following predefined collections of software.

I think I removed the first your already because it scanned better.

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Bug#380093: Debian branding

2006-07-28 Thread Eddy Petrişor

On 28/07/06, Joey Hess [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

Eddy Petrisor wrote:
 May I suggest removing your from your proposed text? It seems more
 professional to me.

 At the moment, only the core of the system is installed. To tune the
 system to your needs, you can choose to install one or more of the
 following predefined collections of software.

I think I removed the first your already because it scanned better.


Indeed, this way seems better (actually, that exact your bothered
me, but I might have not been too clear on that). Also, note that in
some situations the installation is not done on a system owned by the
person doing the installation, so is more correct *not* to say your
system ;-) .

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Bug#380093: Debian branding

2006-07-27 Thread Colin Watson
Package: tasksel
Version: 2.50
Severity: wishlist

tasksel's debconf templates mention Debian in two places:

_Description: Choose software to install:
 At the moment, only the core of Debian is installed. To tune the
 system to your needs, you can choose to install one or more of the
 following predefined collections of software.

_Description: Debian software selection

It would be nice if this text were more generic so that derived
distributions didn't have to mess with it. How about only the core of
your new system is installed and Software selection?

Thanks,

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