Re: [alto] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt

2021-01-12 Thread Jensen Zhang 
Hi Qin,

Thanks for pointing that out. We have fixed them in version -16.

Cheers,
Jensen


On Tue, Jan 12, 2021 at 3:04 PM Qin Wu  wrote:

> Hi, Jensen：
>
> IDnits tool shows two errors:
>
>
> https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt
>
>   ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 7159 (Obsoleted by RFC 8259)
>
>   ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC8008], [RFC7336],
>
>  [RFC6707]), which it shouldn't.  Please replace those with straight
>
>  textual mentions of the documents in question.
>
>
>
> Please fix them.
>
>
>
> -Qin
>
> *发件人:* alto [mailto:alto-boun...@ietf.org] *代表 *Jensen Zhang
> *发送时间:* 2021年1月12日 14:36
> *收件人:* IETF ALTO 
> *主题:* [alto] Fwd: I-D Action:
> draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt
>
>
>
> Hi all,
>
>
>
> We just submitted version -15 of the ALTO CDNI document to address the
> following issues:
>
>
>
> - Replaced the deprecated term "unified properties" with "entity property
> map" to be consistent with draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15
>
> - Moved I-D.ietf-alto-unified-props-new into the normative references
> (suggested by Qin [1])
>
>
>
> [1]
> https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/clLDN-B7nDlIKN3Tq4qxug83tic/
>
>
>
> Best regards,
>
> Jensen
>
>
>
> -- Forwarded message -
> From: 
> Date: Tue, Jan 12, 2021 at 2:16 PM
> Subject: [alto] I-D Action:
> draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt
> To: 
> Cc: 
>
>
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG
> of the IETF.
>
> Title   : Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI)
> Request Routing: CDNI Footprint and Capabilities Advertisement using ALTO
> Authors : Jan Seedorf
>   Y.R. Yang
>   Kevin J. Ma
>   Jon Peterson
>   Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
> Filename: draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt
> Pages   : 41
> Date: 2021-01-11
>
> Abstract:
>The Content Delivery Networks Interconnection (CDNI) framework
>[RFC6707] defines a set of protocols to interconnect CDNs, to achieve
>multiple goals such as extending the reach of a given CDN to areas
>that are not covered by that particular CDN.  One component that is
>needed to achieve the goal of CDNI described in [RFC7336] is the CDNI
>Request Routing Footprint & Capabilities Advertisement interface
>(FCI).  [RFC8008] defines precisely the semantics of FCI and provides
>guidelines on the FCI protocol, but the exact protocol is explicitly
>outside the scope of that document.  This document defines an FCI
>protocol using the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO)
>protocol, following the guidelines defined in [RFC8008].
>
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
> submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
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Re: [alto] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt

2021-01-11 Thread Qin Wu 
Hi, Jensen：
IDnits tool shows two errors:
https://www6.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt
  ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 7159 (Obsoleted by RFC 8259)
  ** The abstract seems to contain references ([RFC8008], [RFC7336],
 [RFC6707]), which it shouldn't.  Please replace those with straight
 textual mentions of the documents in question.

Please fix them.

-Qin
发件人: alto [mailto:alto-boun...@ietf.org] 代表 Jensen Zhang
发送时间: 2021年1月12日 14:36
收件人: IETF ALTO 
主题: [alto] Fwd: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt

Hi all,

We just submitted version -15 of the ALTO CDNI document to address the 
following issues:

- Replaced the deprecated term "unified properties" with "entity property map" 
to be consistent with draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-15
- Moved I-D.ietf-alto-unified-props-new into the normative references 
(suggested by Qin [1])

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/alto/clLDN-B7nDlIKN3Tq4qxug83tic/

Best regards,
Jensen

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG of 
the IETF.

Title   : Content Delivery Network Interconnection (CDNI) 
Request Routing: CDNI Footprint and Capabilities Advertisement using ALTO
Authors : Jan Seedorf
  Y.R. Yang
  Kevin J. Ma
  Jon Peterson
  Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
Filename: draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15.txt
Pages   : 41
Date: 2021-01-11

Abstract:
   The Content Delivery Networks Interconnection (CDNI) framework
   [RFC6707] defines a set of protocols to interconnect CDNs, to achieve
   multiple goals such as extending the reach of a given CDN to areas
   that are not covered by that particular CDN.  One component that is
   needed to achieve the goal of CDNI described in [RFC7336] is the CDNI
   Request Routing Footprint & Capabilities Advertisement interface
   (FCI).  [RFC8008] defines precisely the semantics of FCI and provides
   guidelines on the FCI protocol, but the exact protocol is explicitly
   outside the scope of that document.  This document defines an FCI
   protocol using the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization (ALTO)
   protocol, following the guidelines defined in [RFC8008].



The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto/

There are also htmlized versions available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-cdni-request-routing-alto-15


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at 
tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/


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