Re: [bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10

[Vijay Gurbani]

Dear Jorge: Thank you for addressing my comments.

The edits look good, I have no further comments on the draft.

Cheers,

- vijay

On Thu, Jul 6, 2023 at 12:58 PM Jorge Rabadan (Nokia) <
jorge.raba...@nokia.com> wrote:

> Hi Vijay,
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> Thanks very much for reviewing.
>
> We just published version 11 which addresses all your comments.
>
>
>
> Thanks!
>
> Jorge
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>
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> Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10
> Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
> Review Date: 2023-07-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-11
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
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> Summary: The draft is ready for publications as a Proposed Standard with a
> few
> nite.
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> Major issues: 0
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> Minor issues: 1 (please see below)
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> Nits/editorial comments: 3 (please see below)
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> Minor
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> - Sec 2, you may consider ordering the abbreviations alphabetically as it
> may
> be easier for the reader to find what they are looking for.
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> Nits:
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> - Sec 1.1, s/two new DF Algs/two new DF algorithms/ (unless, of course, in
> your
> nomenclature, "Alg" means something specific).
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> - Sec 3, the opening sentence is too long.  You may consider the following
> edit: s/route, by replacing/route.  It does so by replacing/
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> - Sec 4.1, bullet d, s/E.g., 50/e.g., 50/
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Re: [bess] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10

[Jorge Rabadan (Nokia)]

Hi Vijay,

Thanks very much for reviewing.
We just published version 11 which addresses all your comments.

Thanks!
Jorge

From: Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker 
Date: Sunday, July 2, 2023 at 12:13 PM
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Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-bess-evpn-pref-df-10
Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani
Review Date: 2023-07-02
IETF LC End Date: 2023-07-11
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: The draft is ready for publications as a Proposed Standard with a few
nite.

Major issues: 0

Minor issues: 1 (please see below)

Nits/editorial comments: 3 (please see below)

Minor

- Sec 2, you may consider ordering the abbreviations alphabetically as it may
be easier for the reader to find what they are looking for.

Nits:

- Sec 1.1, s/two new DF Algs/two new DF algorithms/ (unless, of course, in your
nomenclature, "Alg" means something specific).

- Sec 3, the opening sentence is too long.  You may consider the following
edit: s/route, by replacing/route.  It does so by replacing/

- Sec 4.1, bullet d, s/E.g., 50/e.g., 50/

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