>  Description: A layer 2 tunneling protocol implementation.
>   l2tpd is the open source implementation of the L2TP tunneling
>   protocol (RFC2661). It does implement both LAC and LNS role
> - in a L2TP networking architecture. The main goal of this protocol is
> + in an L2TP networking architecture. The main goal of this protocol is
>   to tunnel PPP frame trough an ip network.

Well that is a funny "typo" to pick, given the many available!  It is
debatable whether this should be "a L2TP" or "an L2TP"; that depends
on whether you read "L2TP" as "el-tu-tee-pee" or "Layer Two ..."

However there are other unarguable typos, as well as awkward and
ungrammatical constructions.  I correct them here.

-Description: A layer 2 tunneling protocol implementation.
+Description: A Layer Two Tunneling Protocol implementation.
- l2tpd is the open source implementation of the L2TP tunneling
+ l2tpd is an open source implementation of the L2TP tunneling
- protocol (RFC2661). It does implement both LAC and LNS role
+ protocol (RFC2661). It implements both the LAC and LNS roles of
- in a L2TP networking architecture. The main goal of this protocol is
+ the L2TP networking architecture. The main goal of L2TP is
- to tunnel PPP frame trough an ip network.
+ to tunnel PPP frames through an IP network.

Cheers!
--
Barak A. Pearlmutter
 Hamilton Institute & Dept Comp Sci, NUI Maynooth, Co. Kildare, Ireland
 http://www.bcl.hamilton.ie/~barak/


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