Bug#349687: package description badly worded
On Wed, Jan 25, 2006 at 08:57:00AM +0900, ARAKI Yasuhiro wrote: I will fix description of sip-tester package ASAP. Well, no need to hurry :-) I found the first error in my suggested text: equipement - equipment An Englishperson will find more. -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of unsubscribe. Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Bug#349687: package description badly worded
Package: sip-tester Version: 1.1rc4-1 Severity: minor This package is destributed as Sipp by author. package - software destributed - distributed Sipp - SIPp by author - by its authors Then a sentence about SIP follows, which should be - IMHO - at the end of the text. Finally you describe the tool by using the pronoun it to reference it, but the last noun was SIP, the protocol, not SIPp, the tool. You do not describe, what the tool is or what it does, instead only some of its features are listed. customizable (xml based) scenarios - custom XML scenario files call-rate - call rate My suggestion for the text is: sip-tester is a test tool and traffic generator for the SIP protocol. It can be used to test SIP equipement like SIP proxies, SIP media servers, etc. and to emulate user agents calling a SIP system. Its features are: * a few basic SipStone user agent scenarios included * custom XML scenario files even for complex call flows * comprehensive set of real-time statistics * TCP and UDP transport * dynamically adjustable call rates * send RTP traffic This software is distributed as SIPp by its authors. SIP is the Session Initiation Protocol, a standard signalling protocol for initiating, modifying, and terminating Internet conferencing, telephony (VoIP - Voice over IP), video, and instant messaging. Beware: I'm not a native speaker! -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of unsubscribe. Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Bug#349687: package description badly worded
Thanks Borgert, I will fix description of sip-tester package ASAP. -- ARAKI Yasuhiro A Debian Official Developer [EMAIL PROTECTED] From: W. Borgert [EMAIL PROTECTED] Subject: Bug#349687: package description badly worded Date: Tue, 24 Jan 2006 17:33:24 +0100 Package: sip-tester Version: 1.1rc4-1 Severity: minor This package is destributed as Sipp by author. package - software destributed - distributed Sipp - SIPp by author - by its authors Then a sentence about SIP follows, which should be - IMHO - at the end of the text. Finally you describe the tool by using the pronoun it to reference it, but the last noun was SIP, the protocol, not SIPp, the tool. You do not describe, what the tool is or what it does, instead only some of its features are listed. customizable (xml based) scenarios - custom XML scenario files call-rate - call rate My suggestion for the text is: sip-tester is a test tool and traffic generator for the SIP protocol. It can be used to test SIP equipement like SIP proxies, SIP media servers, etc. and to emulate user agents calling a SIP system. Its features are: * a few basic SipStone user agent scenarios included * custom XML scenario files even for complex call flows * comprehensive set of real-time statistics * TCP and UDP transport * dynamically adjustable call rates * send RTP traffic This software is distributed as SIPp by its authors. SIP is the Session Initiation Protocol, a standard signalling protocol for initiating, modifying, and terminating Internet conferencing, telephony (VoIP - Voice over IP), video, and instant messaging. Beware: I'm not a native speaker! -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to [EMAIL PROTECTED] with a subject of unsubscribe. Trouble? Contact [EMAIL PROTECTED]
