Bug#680640: [libc-ares2] name resolves in descriptions

2012-11-04 Thread Gregor Jasny
Dear l10n-english team,

could you please comment on Bug 680640?

On 7/7/12 5:07 PM, Filipus Klutiero wrote:
 Package: libc-ares2
 Version: 1.9.1-3
 Severity: minor
 
 The short description reads:
 
 library for asynchronous name resolves
 
 One can say that foo.com resolves to 192.168.0.1, but - although I am
 not a native speaker of English - I don't think resolves can be used
 in the sense of name resolutions. The noun resolves exists, but not
 with that meaning.

Thanks for your help,
Gregor


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Bug#680640: [libc-ares2] name resolves in descriptions

2012-11-04 Thread Justin B Rye
 Filipus Klutiero wrote:
 The short description reads:
 library for asynchronous name resolves
 
 One can say that foo.com resolves to 192.168.0.1, but - although I am
 not a native speaker of English - I don't think resolves can be used
 in the sense of name resolutions. The noun resolves exists, but not
 with that meaning.

It's true - resolve does exist as a noun, but not with this meaning
(and it probably doesn't have a plural).  You want:

   library for asynchronous name resolution

or maybe one of these:

   library for resolving names asynchronously
   asynchronous name resolution library
   asynchronous name resolver
   C Asynchronous RESolver

The long description (following the upstream webpage) has some grammar
and punctuation oddities too; patch and revised version attached.
-- 
JBR with qualifications in linguistics, experience as a Debian
sysadmin, and probably no clue about this particular package
Source: c-ares
Priority: extra
Maintainer: Andreas Schuldei andr...@debian.org
Uploaders: Gregor Jasny gja...@googlemail.com
DM-Upload-Allowed: yes
Build-Depends: debhelper (= 8.1.3~), autotools-dev
Standards-Version: 3.9.3
Section: libs
Vcs-Browser: http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=collab-maint/c-ares.git
Vcs-Git: git://git.debian.org/git/collab-maint/c-ares.git
Homepage: http://c-ares.haxx.se/


Package: libc-ares-dev
Section: libdevel
Architecture: any
Conflicts: libares-dev
Depends: libc-ares2 (= ${binary:Version}),
 ${shlibs:Depends},
 ${misc:Depends}
Multi-Arch: same
Description: asynchronous name resolver - development files
 c-ares is a C library that performs DNS requests and name resolution
 asynchronously.
 .
 It is a fork of the library named ares, with additional features:
  * IPv6 support;
  * extended cross-platform portability;
  * 64-bit clean sources.
 .
 This package contains development files (headers and static libraries).

Package: libc-ares2
Conflicts: libcares2
Architecture: any
Replaces: libc-ares1
Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
Pre-Depends: ${misc:Pre-Depends}
Multi-Arch: same
Description: asynchronous name resolver
 c-ares is a C library that performs DNS requests and name resolution
 asynchronously.
 .
 It is a fork of the library named ares, with additional features:
  * IPv6 support;
  * extended cross-platform portability;
  * 64-bit clean sources.
 .
 This package provides the shared libraries.
diff -ru c-ares-1.9.1.pristine/debian/control c-ares-1.9.1/debian/control
--- c-ares-1.9.1.pristine/debian/control2012-06-18 17:21:53.0 
+0100
+++ c-ares-1.9.1/debian/control 2012-11-04 12:17:35.918725550 +
@@ -19,16 +19,14 @@
  ${shlibs:Depends},
  ${misc:Depends}
 Multi-Arch: same
-Description: library for asynchronous name resolves (development files)
- c-ares is a C library that performs DNS requests 
- and name resolves asynchronously. 
+Description: asynchronous name resolver - development files
+ c-ares is a C library that performs DNS requests and name resolution
+ asynchronously.
  .
- c-ares is a fork of the library named 'ares'
- .
- additionally it features 
-  * IPv6 support
-  * Extended cross platform portability
-  * 64bit cleaned sources
+ It is a fork of the library named ares, with additional features:
+  * IPv6 support;
+  * extended cross-platform portability;
+  * 64-bit clean sources.
  .
  This package contains development files (headers and static libraries).
 
@@ -39,13 +37,13 @@
 Depends: ${shlibs:Depends}, ${misc:Depends}
 Pre-Depends: ${misc:Pre-Depends}
 Multi-Arch: same
-Description: library for asynchronous name resolves
- c-ares is a C library that performs DNS requests 
- and name resolves asynchronously. 
+Description: asynchronous name resolver
+ c-ares is a C library that performs DNS requests and name resolution
+ asynchronously.
  .
- c-ares is a fork of the library named 'ares'
+ It is a fork of the library named ares, with additional features:
+  * IPv6 support;
+  * extended cross-platform portability;
+  * 64-bit clean sources.
  .
- additionally it features 
-  * IPv6 support
-  * Extended cross platform portability
-  * 64bit cleaned sources
+ This package provides the shared libraries.


Bug#680640: [libc-ares2] name resolves in descriptions

2012-11-04 Thread Gregor Jasny
tags 680640 + patch pending
thanks

On 11/4/12 1:20 PM, Justin B Rye wrote:
 It's true - resolve does exist as a noun, but not with this meaning
 (and it probably doesn't have a plural).
 The long description (following the upstream webpage) has some grammar
 and punctuation oddities too; patch and revised version attached.

Thank you, I applied your patch to the c-ares git repository:
http://anonscm.debian.org/gitweb/?p=collab-maint/c-ares.git;a=commit;h=5174fb608821f61a870daa6301a9e8b56af446d1

It will be applied with the next package upload.

Thanks,
Gregor


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Bug#680640: [libc-ares2] name resolves in descriptions

2012-07-07 Thread Filipus Klutiero

Package: libc-ares2
Version: 1.9.1-3
Severity: minor

The short description reads:


library for asynchronous name resolves


One can say that foo.com resolves to 192.168.0.1, but - although I am 
not a native speaker of English - I don't think resolves can be used 
in the sense of name resolutions. The noun resolves exists, but not 
with that meaning.





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