Bug#736588: debian-handbook: gendered language used when referring to subjects

2015-01-09 Thread Johannes Schauer
Hi,

On Fri, 9 Jan 2015 00:39:11 +0100 Raphael Hertzog hert...@debian.org wrote:
 On Thu, 08 Jan 2015, Johannes Schauer wrote:
  Is there still time to supply one?
 
 Yes!

okay, please find a patch attached.

I used the following to search for problems:

egrep --color -r [^A-Za-z][Hh]e[^A-Za-z] en-US
egrep --color -r [^A-Za-z][Hh]im[^A-Za-z] en-US
egrep --color -r [^A-Za-z][Hh]is[^A-Za-z] en-US

I also noticed that the section OpenSSL flaw in Debian Etch uses the male
pronoun to talk about the OpenSSL maintainer. Now this is probably no problem
because the OpenSSL maintainer probably (without having checked) identifies as
male. But the paragraph never mentions the identity of the OpenSSL maintainer.
So I wonder why the gender of the OpenSSL maintainer is important information
in this paragraph. If the name of the maintainer is not given, then why give a
hint to their gender? For the technical point this paragraph makes, the gender
does not matter. So I wonder whether this paragraph should be made neutral as
well.

What do you think?

cheers, josch
From d1f3782d34cac0d7f57356064a2bfb7eab3e4ded Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: josch j.scha...@email.de
Date: Fri, 9 Jan 2015 09:37:02 +0100
Subject: [PATCH] be more gender neutral

---
 en-US/01_the-debian-project.xml | 8 
 en-US/15_debian-packaging.xml   | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/en-US/01_the-debian-project.xml b/en-US/01_the-debian-project.xml
index 2562483..d9be601 100644
--- a/en-US/01_the-debian-project.xml
+++ b/en-US/01_the-debian-project.xml
@@ -866,9 +866,9 @@
   within which the developers can relate: the views of the DPL are
   implicitly approved by the majority of project members./para
 
-  paraSpecifically, the leader has real authority; his vote resolves
-  tie votes; he can make any decision which is not already under the
-  authority of someone else and can delegate part of his
+  paraSpecifically, the leader has real authority; their vote resolves
+  tie votes; they can make any decision which is not already under the
+  authority of someone else and can delegate part of their
   responsibilities./para
   indextermprimaryMurdock, Ian/primary/indexterm
   indextermprimaryPerens, Bruce/primary/indexterm
@@ -1834,7 +1834,7 @@
   corrections and search for other problems resulting from the
   modifications. Several updates may then occur rapidly. During these
   times, autobuilder robots come into action. Most frequently, the
-  maintainer has only one traditional PC and has compiled his package
+  maintainer has only one traditional PC and has compiled their package
   on the amd64 (or i386) architecture; the autobuilders take over and
   automatically compile versions for all the other architectures. Some
   compilations may fail; the maintainer will then receive a bug report
diff --git a/en-US/15_debian-packaging.xml b/en-US/15_debian-packaging.xml
index c855020..a11787c 100644
--- a/en-US/15_debian-packaging.xml
+++ b/en-US/15_debian-packaging.xml
@@ -1081,7 +1081,7 @@ release_label = Internal Packages
 	manuals targeting the new maintainers, and in the Debian
 	developer's reference. An attentive reading of this document should
 	be enough to answer the examiner's questions. If the answers are
-	not satisfactory, the candidate will be informed. He will then have
+	not satisfactory, the candidate will be informed. They will then have
 	to read (again) the relevant documentation before trying again. In
 	the cases where the existing documentation does not contain the
 	appropriate answer for the question, the candidate can usually
-- 
2.0.1



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Bug#736588: debian-handbook: gendered language used when referring to subjects

2015-01-09 Thread Raphael Hertzog
On Fri, 09 Jan 2015, Johannes Schauer wrote:
 okay, please find a patch attached.

Thanks, merged.

 I also noticed that the section OpenSSL flaw in Debian Etch uses the male
 pronoun to talk about the OpenSSL maintainer. Now this is probably no problem
 because the OpenSSL maintainer probably (without having checked) identifies as
 male. But the paragraph never mentions the identity of the OpenSSL maintainer.
 So I wonder why the gender of the OpenSSL maintainer is important information
 in this paragraph. If the name of the maintainer is not given, then why give a
 hint to their gender? For the technical point this paragraph makes, the gender
 does not matter. So I wonder whether this paragraph should be made neutral as
 well.
 
 What do you think?

I have no strong opinion so I rewrote the section to avoid such references.

Cheers,
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Learn to master Debian: http://debian-handbook.info/get/


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Bug#736588: debian-handbook: gendered language used when referring to subjects

2015-01-08 Thread Raphael Hertzog
Hi,

On Thu, 08 Jan 2015, Johannes Schauer wrote:
  FWIW we're starting to work on the jessie version of the handbook, so now is
  the good time to consider submitting such patches...
 
 did the submitter supply a patch?

No.

 Is there still time to supply one?

Yes!

Cheers,
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Bug#736588: debian-handbook: gendered language used when referring to subjects

2015-01-08 Thread Johannes Schauer
Hi,

On Tue, 16 Dec 2014 12:11:05 +0100 Raphael Hertzog hert...@debian.org wrote:
 On Sat, 25 Jan 2014, Raphael Hertzog wrote:
   Some authors express concern that this is ambiguous as 'they' and 
   'theirs' are
   often used as plural pronouns. In this case, a short explanation of the
   inclusive language in the foreword can help.
   
   If you're accepting patches, I'm happy to sort this out. It'd be largely 
   a sed
   script followed by spot-checking the diff.
  
  I do accept patches, but those fixes are often better done by rewriting
  the sentence, either using a synonym to avoid the pronoun or by using
  passive voice.
  
  http://www.herodios.com/pronouns.html
 
 FWIW we're starting to work on the jessie version of the handbook, so now is
 the good time to consider submitting such patches...

did the submitter supply a patch?

Is there still time to supply one?

Thanks!

cheers, josch


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Bug#736588: debian-handbook: gendered language used when referring to subjects

2014-12-16 Thread Raphael Hertzog
On Sat, 25 Jan 2014, Raphael Hertzog wrote:
  Some authors express concern that this is ambiguous as 'they' and 'theirs' 
  are
  often used as plural pronouns. In this case, a short explanation of the
  inclusive language in the foreword can help.
  
  If you're accepting patches, I'm happy to sort this out. It'd be largely a 
  sed
  script followed by spot-checking the diff.
 
 I do accept patches, but those fixes are often better done by rewriting
 the sentence, either using a synonym to avoid the pronoun or by using
 passive voice.
 
 http://www.herodios.com/pronouns.html

FWIW we're starting to work on the jessie version of the handbook, so now is
the good time to consider submitting such patches...

Cheers,
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Bug#736588: debian-handbook: gendered language used when referring to subjects

2014-01-25 Thread Daniel Bryan
Package: debian-handbook
Version: 6.0+20121031
Severity: normal

Dear Maintainer,

The Debian Administrator's Handbook uses male pronouns when referring to
subjects using the system.

The effects of exclusive language have been studied quantitatively in a range
of fields. One example picked largely at random:

http://gradworks.umi.com/33/52/3352854.html

I suggest using 'they' and 'theirs' instead of 'he' and 'his' where possible.

Some authors express concern that this is ambiguous as 'they' and 'theirs' are
often used as plural pronouns. In this case, a short explanation of the
inclusive language in the foreword can help.

If you're accepting patches, I'm happy to sort this out. It'd be largely a sed
script followed by spot-checking the diff.

-- System Information:
Debian Release: 7.2
  APT prefers stable
  APT policy: (500, 'stable')
Architecture: amd64 (x86_64)

Kernel: Linux 3.12.6-1-ARCH (SMP w/2 CPU cores; PREEMPT)
Locale: LANG=en_US.UTF-8, LC_CTYPE=en_US.UTF-8 (charmap=UTF-8)
Shell: /bin/sh linked to /bin/dash

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Bug#736588: debian-handbook: gendered language used when referring to subjects

2014-01-25 Thread Raphael Hertzog
Hi Daniel,

On Sat, 25 Jan 2014, Daniel Bryan wrote:
 The effects of exclusive language have been studied quantitatively in a range
 of fields. One example picked largely at random:
 
 http://gradworks.umi.com/33/52/3352854.html
 
 I suggest using 'they' and 'theirs' instead of 'he' and 'his' where possible.
 
 Some authors express concern that this is ambiguous as 'they' and 'theirs' are
 often used as plural pronouns. In this case, a short explanation of the
 inclusive language in the foreword can help.
 
 If you're accepting patches, I'm happy to sort this out. It'd be largely a sed
 script followed by spot-checking the diff.

I do accept patches, but those fixes are often better done by rewriting
the sentence, either using a synonym to avoid the pronoun or by using
passive voice.

http://www.herodios.com/pronouns.html

Cheers,
-- 
Raphaël Hertzog ◈ Debian Developer

Discover the Debian Administrator's Handbook:
→ http://debian-handbook.info/get/


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