Package: debian-reference Severity: wishlist Tags: patch
Hi Osamu, [sending this to the BTS, since I got no reaction from you yet, so that it doesn't get lost.] I noticed some glitches in the recent changings in DR. Please find some diffs for the files in asciidoc attached. I have marked the changes like this. ^^^^ One change fixes a build error due to changed entity name. Greetings Holger --- 02_package.txt 2014-07-06 01:13:48.846830856 +0200 +++ 02_package_workingcopy.txt 2014-07-06 22:36:23.368211390 +0200 @@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ - The `aptitude` command sometimes suggests mass package removals for the system upgrade on the `testing` or `unstable` Debian system. - This situation has frightened many system administrators. Don't panic. - This seems to be caused mostly by the version skew among packages depended or recommended by a meta-package such as `gnome-core`. - - This can be resolved by selecting "Cancel pending actions" in the `aptitude` command menu, existing it, and using "`apt-get dist-upgrade`". + - This can be resolved by selecting "Cancel pending actions" in the `aptitude` command menu, exiting aptitude, and using "`apt-get dist-upgrade`". ^^^^^^^^ The `apt-get` and `apt-cache` commands are the most **basic** APT-based package management tools. --- 04_auth.txt 2014-07-06 01:13:48.850830879 +0200 +++ 04_auth_workingcopy.txt 2014-07-07 23:29:33.524934967 +0200 @@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ The http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Secure_Shell[Secure Shell (SSH)] program provides secure encrypted communications between two untrusted hosts over an insecure network with the secure authentication. It consists of the http://www.openssh.org/[OpenSSH] client, `ssh`(1), and the http://www.openssh.org/[OpenSSH] daemon, `sshd`(8). This SSH can be used to tunnel an insecure protocol communication such as POP and X securely over the Internet with the port forwarding feature. -The client tries to authenticate itself using host-based authentication, public key authentication, challenge-response authentication, or password authentication. The use of public key authentication enables the remote password-less login. See <<_the_remote_access_server_and_utility_ssh>>. +The client tries to authenticate itself using host-based authentication, public key authentication, challenge-response authentication, or password authentication. The use of public key authentication enables the remote password-less login. See <<_the_remote_access_server_and_utilities_ssh>>. ^^^^ ==== Extra security measures for the Internet --- 08_i18nl10n.txt 2014-07-06 01:13:48.854830893 +0200 +++ 08_i18nl10n_workingcopy.txt 2014-07-06 21:32:25.937182637 +0200 @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ ==== The input method support with IBus -Mltilingual input to the application is processed as: +Multilingual input to the application is processed as: ^^^ ------------------------------ Keyboard Application --- 09_systips.txt 2014-07-06 21:34:15.229724559 +0200 +++ 09_systips_workingcopy.txt 2014-07-06 21:34:25.949777696 +0200 @@ -1311,7 +1311,7 @@ # wodim -v -eject blank=fast dev=/dev/hda cd.iso -------------------- -TIP: If your desktop system mounts CD automatically, unmount it by "`sudo unmount /dev/hda`" from console before using `wodim`(1). +TIP: If your desktop system mounts CDs automatically, unmount it by "`sudo umount /dev/hda`" from console before using `wodim`(1). ^^ ^^ ==== Mounting the ISO9660 image file --- 10_datamngt.txt 2014-07-06 01:13:48.858830915 +0200 +++ 10_datamngt_workingcopy.txt 2014-07-06 22:03:32.898440364 +0200 @@ -283,7 +283,7 @@ TIP: The choice of encoding may need to be provided as mount option (see <<_filename_encoding>>). -TIP: GUI menu to unmount a filesystem may remove its dynamically generated device node such as "`/dev/sdc`". If you wish to keep its device node, unmount it with the `mount`(8) command from the shell prompt. +TIP: The use of the GUI menu to unmount a filesystem may remove its dynamically generated device node such as "`/dev/ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ sdc`". If you wish to keep its device node, unmount it with the `umount`(8) command from the shell prompt. ==== Filesystem choice for sharing data -- Holger Wansing <hwans...@mailbox.org> -- To UNSUBSCRIBE, email to debian-bugs-dist-requ...@lists.debian.org with a subject of "unsubscribe". Trouble? Contact listmas...@lists.debian.org