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Hi Niels,
I reviewed the patch and corrected some typos and spaces.
Moreover, I'd prefer to use ...corresponding instead of necessary in the If
your local setup requires... sentence, merely a question of style, though.
Take it or leave it :-)
Attached you'll find the diff of the patch. I renamed it using 0002-...
I hope that's ok.
Regards
Stephan Beck
Index: 0001-en-issues-Document-the-base-password-shell-reset.patch
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--- 0001-en-issues-Document-the-base-password-shell-reset.patch (Revision 1)
+++ 0001-en-issues-Document-the-base-password-shell-reset.patch (Arbeitskopie)
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
+ systemitem role=packagebase-passwd/systemitem/title
+ para
+The upgrade of systemitem role=packagebase-passwd/systemitem
-+package will reset the shell of system users that is provides to
++package will reset the shell of system users that is provided to
+the nologin shell. This includes the following users:
+ /para
+ itemizedlist
@@ -79,13 +79,13 @@
+ para
+If your local setup requires that any of these users have a shell,
+you should say no to migrating or migrate and then change the shell
-+of the necessary users. Notable examples includes local backups
++of the corresponding users. Notable examples include local backups
+done via the backup user with an ssh-key authentication.
+ /para
+ caution
+para
+ The migration will happen automatically if your debconf question
-+ priorty is high or above.
++ priority is high or above.
+/para
+ /caution
+ para
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@
+ para
+Where replaceableusername/replaceable is the name of the user
+in question and replaceablecurrent-shell-mangled/replaceable
-+is the mangled name of the shell. The mangling is done by
++is the mangled name of the shell. The mangling is done by
+replacing all non-alphanumerical, non-dashes and non-underscores
+with underscores. E.g. /bin/bash becomes _bin_bash.
+ /para
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