Re: GFDL GR: Amendment: no significant invariant sections in main

2006-02-19 Thread Adeodato Simó
* Osamu Aoki [Sun, 12 Feb 2006 10:22:11 +0900]:

 Thus, let me propose an amendment to Adeodato Simó's proposal:

  s/include no invariant sections/don't include any significant contents
  to prevent our Freedom in invariant sections/ and matching changes to
  the text.

  In case it's necessary: sorry, I don't accept this modification into
  my proposed wording.

  Cheers,

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Re: GFDL GR: Amendment: no significant invariant sections in main

2006-02-12 Thread Pierre Habouzit
Le Dim 12 Février 2006 02:22, Osamu Aoki a écrit :
 Hi,

 I second Adeodato Simó's proposal but at the same time I consider it
 still leaves some spaces for the absolutism interpretation which
 tends to plague Debian.  I consider we should have reasonable space
 for judgment for many things in life.

 Let's consider a documentation written in the SGML and released under
 GFDL in which invariant section is claimed but its invariant section
 is in commented-out section which contain nothing but list of author
 name and their contact e-mail address.  This is a really possible
 case since people consider putting their e-mail addresses in
 printable contents tends to cause headache with spams.

  GFDL blah, blah,...
  Invariant section being following comment section in SGML
  !--
chapter 1: author1_name [EMAIL PROTECTED]
chapter 2: author2_name [EMAIL PROTECTED]
  --

 Under literal rule of Adeodato Simó's proposal, above GFDL
 documentation can not be in main since author forgot to place
 removal rule for the content. I consider GFDL documentation with such
 non-significant contents should receive the same treatment as the
 invariant-less GFDL documentation.  Other possible GFDL invariant
 section which, I consider, should be permitted is an advertisement
 clause by the author or publisher.  I see no difference from 4 clause
 BSD license.

 Thus, let me propose an amendment to Adeodato Simó's proposal:

  s/include no invariant sections/don't include any significant
 contents to prevent our Freedom in invariant sections/ and matching
 changes to the text.

 So here is my proposal in full text:
 ---8
---

 Debian and the GNU Free Documentation License
 =

 This is the position of the Debian Project about the GNU Free
 Documentation License as published by the Free Software Foundation:

   1. We consider that the GNU Free Documentation License version 1.2
  conflicts with traditional requirements for free software, since
 it allows for non-removable, non-modifiable parts to be present in
 documents licensed under it. Such parts are commonly referred to as
 invariant sections, and are described in Section 4 of the GFDL.

  As modifiability is a fundamental requirement of the Debian Free
  Software Guidelines, this restriction is not acceptable for us,
 and we cannot accept in our distribution works that include such
 unmodifiable content.

   2. At the same time, we also consider that works licensed under the
  GNU Free Documentation License that don't include any
 significant contents to prevent our Freedom in invariant sections do
 fully meet the requirements of the Debian Free Software Guidelines.

  This means that works that don't include any significant
 contents to prevent our Freedom in Invariant Sections, Cover Texts,
 Acknowledgements, and Dedications (or that do, but permission to
 remove them is explicitly granted), are suitable for the main
 component of our distribution.

   3. Despite the above, GFDL'd documentation is still not free of
  trouble, even for works with no invariant sections: as an
 example, it is incompatible with the major free software licenses,
 which means that GFDL'd text can't be incorporated into free
 programs.

  For this reason, we encourage documentation authors to license
  their works (or dual-license, together with the GFDL) under the
  same terms as the software they refer to, or any of the
 traditional free software licenses like the the GPL or the BSD
 license.

my understanding of this is that it's a minor problem, that upstreams 
are likely to solve easily. I hope dato  won't accept that as a 
amendment of his proposal, because I think it changes it spirit a lot, 
and I won't second it.

There is no need to draw a blurry line, for problems that a maintainer 
and upstream are really likely to solve in peace.
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Re: GFDL GR: Amendment: no significant invariant sections in main

2006-02-12 Thread martin f krafft
also sprach Osamu Aoki [EMAIL PROTECTED] [2006.02.12.0222 +0100]:
  s/include no invariant sections/don't include any significant contents
  to prevent our Freedom in invariant sections/ and matching changes to
  the text.

I think this sounds incredibly vague and leaves significant up in
the air for interpretation. We are possibly asking for more trouble
with this, IMHO. Please do not be angry if I do not second it.

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GFDL GR: Amendment: no significant invariant sections in main

2006-02-11 Thread Osamu Aoki
Hi,

I second Adeodato Simó's proposal but at the same time I consider it
still leaves some spaces for the absolutism interpretation which tends
to plague Debian.  I consider we should have reasonable space for
judgment for many things in life.

Let's consider a documentation written in the SGML and released under
GFDL in which invariant section is claimed but its invariant section is
in commented-out section which contain nothing but list of author name
and their contact e-mail address.  This is a really possible case since
people consider putting their e-mail addresses in printable contents
tends to cause headache with spams. 

 GFDL blah, blah,...
 Invariant section being following comment section in SGML
 !--
   chapter 1: author1_name [EMAIL PROTECTED] 
   chapter 2: author2_name [EMAIL PROTECTED] 
 --

Under literal rule of Adeodato Simó's proposal, above GFDL documentation
can not be in main since author forgot to place removal rule for the
content. I consider GFDL documentation with such non-significant
contents should receive the same treatment as the invariant-less GFDL
documentation.  Other possible GFDL invariant section which, I consider,
should be permitted is an advertisement clause by the author or
publisher.  I see no difference from 4 clause BSD license.

Thus, let me propose an amendment to Adeodato Simó's proposal:

 s/include no invariant sections/don't include any significant contents
 to prevent our Freedom in invariant sections/ and matching changes to
 the text.

So here is my proposal in full text:
---8---

Debian and the GNU Free Documentation License
=

This is the position of the Debian Project about the GNU Free Documentation
License as published by the Free Software Foundation:

  1. We consider that the GNU Free Documentation License version 1.2
 conflicts with traditional requirements for free software, since it
 allows for non-removable, non-modifiable parts to be present in
 documents licensed under it. Such parts are commonly referred to as
 invariant sections, and are described in Section 4 of the GFDL.

 As modifiability is a fundamental requirement of the Debian Free
 Software Guidelines, this restriction is not acceptable for us, and
 we cannot accept in our distribution works that include such
 unmodifiable content.

  2. At the same time, we also consider that works licensed under the
 GNU Free Documentation License that don't include any significant
 contents to prevent our Freedom in invariant sections do fully meet
 the requirements of the Debian Free Software Guidelines.

 This means that works that don't include any significant contents
 to prevent our Freedom in Invariant Sections, Cover Texts,
 Acknowledgements, and Dedications (or that do, but permission to
 remove them is explicitly granted), are suitable for the main
 component of our distribution.

  3. Despite the above, GFDL'd documentation is still not free of
 trouble, even for works with no invariant sections: as an example,
 it is incompatible with the major free software licenses, which
 means that GFDL'd text can't be incorporated into free programs.

 For this reason, we encourage documentation authors to license
 their works (or dual-license, together with the GFDL) under the
 same terms as the software they refer to, or any of the traditional
 free software licenses like the the GPL or the BSD license.

---8---

I understand that this vaguer wording may be considered too lenient by
some people when compered with Adeodato Simó's original proposal.  I
trust that we as a group are able to make rational judgment.

This proposal should prevent any GFDL document with invariant section
containing code or useful data to be in main.  This is not the case
with the literal text of Anton Zinoviev's proposal.  To me, I could
sympathize with some of his argument but the text of his proposal was
too permissive since it gives blanket approval to GFDL.

Osamu

PS: Excuse me for late proposal.
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Re: GFDL GR: Amendment: no significant invariant sections in main

2006-02-11 Thread Hubert Chan
On Sun, 12 Feb 2006 10:22:11 +0900, Osamu Aoki [EMAIL PROTECTED] said:

[...]
  GFDL blah, blah,...
 Invariant section being following comment section in SGML
 !--
   chapter 1: author1_name [EMAIL PROTECTED]
   chapter 2: author2_name [EMAIL PROTECTED]
 --
[...]

This cannot be an invariant section as defined by the GFDL, because the
GFDL says that an invariant section must be a secondary section, and a
secondary section must be a named appendix.  A source comment is not a
named appendix.

Such a document would have to be licensed under a license other than the
GFDL.


That said, I understand the motivation of Osamu's proposal, and I would
consider invariant comments to be more acceptable than invariant
portions of the documentation.  (Of course, the line again gets a bit
blurred when you consider documentation generated from the comments.)
But I don't know whether I would consider it free or not.

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Re: GFDL GR: Amendment: no significant invariant sections in main

2006-02-11 Thread Osamu Aoki
On Sat, Feb 11, 2006 at 07:14:22PM -0700, Hubert Chan wrote:
 On Sun, 12 Feb 2006 10:22:11 +0900, Osamu Aoki [EMAIL PROTECTED] said:
 
 [...]
   GFDL blah, blah,...
  Invariant section being following comment section in SGML
  !--
chapter 1: author1_name [EMAIL PROTECTED]
chapter 2: author2_name [EMAIL PROTECTED]
  --
 [...]

Hmmm... my example may have been confusing.
 
 This cannot be an invariant section as defined by the GFDL, because the
 GFDL says that an invariant section must be a secondary section, and a
 secondary section must be a named appendix.  A source comment is not a
 named appendix.

You are talking Invariant Sections (capitalized) in GFDL.  I, also
Adeodato Simó I think, use lower case invariant section(s) which is
combination of Invariant Sections, Cover Texts, Acknowledgements, and
Dedications being invariant sections which suffer restriction in GFDL
4 MODIFICATIONS.

 Such a document would have to be licensed under a license other than the
 GFDL.
 That said, I understand the motivation of Osamu's proposal, and I would
 consider invariant comments to be more acceptable than invariant
 portions of the documentation.  (Of course, the line again gets a bit
 blurred when you consider documentation generated from the comments.)

That why we need some space for judgement based on each case.  

 But I don't know whether I would consider it free or not.

I do not either until I see real case.

Osamu



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Re: GFDL GR: Amendment: no significant invariant sections in main

2006-02-11 Thread Osamu Aoki
On Sun, Feb 12, 2006 at 11:58:14AM +0900, Osamu Aoki wrote:
 On Sat, Feb 11, 2006 at 07:14:22PM -0700, Hubert Chan wrote:
  On Sun, 12 Feb 2006 10:22:11 +0900, Osamu Aoki [EMAIL PROTECTED] said:
  
  [...]
GFDL blah, blah,...
   Invariant section being following comment section in SGML
   !--
 chapter 1: author1_name [EMAIL PROTECTED]
 chapter 2: author2_name [EMAIL PROTECTED]
   --
  [...]
 
 Hmmm... my example may have been confusing.
  
  This cannot be an invariant section as defined by the GFDL, because the
  GFDL says that an invariant section must be a secondary section, and a
  secondary section must be a named appendix.  A source comment is not a
  named appendix.
 
 You are talking Invariant Sections (capitalized) in GFDL.  I, also
 Adeodato Simó I think, use lower case invariant section(s) which is
 combination of Invariant Sections, Cover Texts, Acknowledgements, and
 Dedications being invariant sections which suffer restriction in GFDL
 4 MODIFICATIONS.

Mmmm... I meant:

You are talking Invariant Sections (capitalized) in GFDL.  I, also
Adeodato Simó I think, use lower case invariant section(s) which is
combination of Invariant Sections, Cover Texts, Acknowledgements, and
Dedications.  The invariant sections suffer restriction in GFDL
4 MODIFICATIONS.

  Such a document would have to be licensed under a license other than the
  GFDL.
  That said, I understand the motivation of Osamu's proposal, and I would
  consider invariant comments to be more acceptable than invariant
  portions of the documentation.  (Of course, the line again gets a bit
  blurred when you consider documentation generated from the comments.)
 
 That why we need some space for judgement based on each case.  
 
  But I don't know whether I would consider it free or not.
 
 I do not either until I see real case.
 
 Osamu
 




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