Re: Logo Proposition for VelocityTools

2007-12-15 Thread Will Glass-Husain
The gradient is pretty cool.

On Dec 14, 2007 9:19 PM, Claude Brisson [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 Some more -subjetive- feeback :

 I really prefer the T of the first version - much softer and lighter.
 And colors were good. Sthing very heavy in the second proposal, whereas
 the first one recalls me of sthing inbetween of a conceptual
 contemporary art artefact and a glass of wine... necessarily
 sympatico... subjective, I told you... what about working around the
 first proposal in the way I suggest here (only poorly crafted by means
 of ugly cuts and pastes from you image):

 http://people.apache.org/~cbrisson/ApacheVelocityTools.png


Claude

 Le mercredi 12 décembre 2007 à 17:54 -0800, Edward a écrit :

  Hi,
 
  Thanks for giving me feedback. Heres an updated version:
  [image: ApacheVelocityTools2.png picture by shadowpwner]
  and a link for those who can't see it:
  http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools2.png
 
  I tried to make the T look more like a T, but now to me it looks like a
  tongue :P (See the resemblance?)
 
  Also, here it is with the current template:
 
  http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/VeltoolsNewLogoPS2.png
 
  The logo will probably be 50% of the current size, I enlarged it so you
  could see the details.
 
  Regards,
 
  Edward
  On Dec 11, 2007 8:57 PM, Nathan Bubna [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 
   Hey Edward,
  
   That's a pretty good start, though i confess that it took me a second
   to realize that the symbol was a V with a T inset.  The T is
   particularly hard to recognize.  Still, the symbol looks a lot
   snazzier than the current meager wrench (no offense, if you're still
   out there Tim Colson :).   I do think the color scheme could use some
   adjustment to fit better, as it clashes a bit right now.  I attached a
   screenshot of this draft logo in the velocitytools docs to show that.
  
   I think that's it for stylistic feedback.  I'm not really the best at
   that.  Functionally, the logo will need to be smaller and could
   probably stand to have some of the surrounding whitespace reduced to
   make better use of its space.
  
   Thanks for working on this!  I'm excited to have a nice logo for once! :)
  
   peace,
   nathan
  
   On Dec 11, 2007 7:17 PM, Edward [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
Hello All,
   
I entered the Google Highly Open Participation Contest for the Velocity
Tools logo.
   
Here is my proposition so far:
   
[image: ApacheVelocityTools.png picture by shadowpwner]
   
In case the image doesn't show:
   
   
   http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools.png
   
Please note this will not be the final draft, but only something to
   start us
off with.
   
Please give helpful comments and suggestions, to improve my work.
   (Example:
Too simple, colors don't match layout, etc.)
   
   
Regards,
   
Edward
   
   
   http://code.google.com/p/google-highly-open-participation-asf/issues/detail?id=52
   
  
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Re: Logo Proposition for VelocityTools

2007-12-15 Thread Edward
 Hi Claude,

Thanks for your suggestion. However, my harddrive died and I am unable to
change the logo until I find my old photoshop CD, which might take some time
XD.

I'm going to email the dev for voting on which logo looks the best. If more
people like the design that you like, I'll recreate it.

Regards,

Edward

On 12/15/07, Claude Brisson [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

 Some more -subjetive- feeback :

 I really prefer the T of the first version - much softer and lighter.
 And colors were good. Sthing very heavy in the second proposal, whereas
 the first one recalls me of sthing inbetween of a conceptual
 contemporary art artefact and a glass of wine... necessarily
 sympatico... subjective, I told you... what about working around the
 first proposal in the way I suggest here (only poorly crafted by means
 of ugly cuts and pastes from you image):

 http://people.apache.org/~cbrisson/ApacheVelocityTools.png


Claude

 Le mercredi 12 décembre 2007 à 17:54 -0800, Edward a écrit :
  Hi,
 
  Thanks for giving me feedback. Heres an updated version:
  [image: ApacheVelocityTools2.png picture by shadowpwner]
  and a link for those who can't see it:
 
 http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools2.png
 
  I tried to make the T look more like a T, but now to me it looks like a
  tongue :P (See the resemblance?)
 
  Also, here it is with the current template:
 
 
 http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/VeltoolsNewLogoPS2.png
 
  The logo will probably be 50% of the current size, I enlarged it so you
  could see the details.
 
  Regards,
 
  Edward
  On Dec 11, 2007 8:57 PM, Nathan Bubna [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 
   Hey Edward,
  
   That's a pretty good start, though i confess that it took me a second
   to realize that the symbol was a V with a T inset.  The T is
   particularly hard to recognize.  Still, the symbol looks a lot
   snazzier than the current meager wrench (no offense, if you're still
   out there Tim Colson :).   I do think the color scheme could use some
   adjustment to fit better, as it clashes a bit right now.  I attached a
   screenshot of this draft logo in the velocitytools docs to show that.
  
   I think that's it for stylistic feedback.  I'm not really the best at
   that.  Functionally, the logo will need to be smaller and could
   probably stand to have some of the surrounding whitespace reduced to
   make better use of its space.
  
   Thanks for working on this!  I'm excited to have a nice logo for once!
 :)
  
   peace,
   nathan
  
   On Dec 11, 2007 7:17 PM, Edward [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
Hello All,
   
I entered the Google Highly Open Participation Contest for the
 Velocity
Tools logo.
   
Here is my proposition so far:
   
[image: ApacheVelocityTools.png picture by shadowpwner]
   
In case the image doesn't show:
   
   
  
 http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools.png
   
Please note this will not be the final draft, but only something to
   start us
off with.
   
Please give helpful comments and suggestions, to improve my work.
   (Example:
Too simple, colors don't match layout, etc.)
   
   
Regards,
   
Edward
   
   
  
 http://code.google.com/p/google-highly-open-participation-asf/issues/detail?id=52
   
  
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Re: VelocityTools Logo Voting.

2007-12-15 Thread Nathan Bubna
ok, here's my vote...

 1) First draft, I didn't like it very much:
 http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools.png

Having now been much influenced by my wife's thoughts :), this would
now be my favorite if it were in the colors of #2, with the word
Tools in thin font (again like #2).

 2)
 http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools2.png

if i must pick from these exact options (no changes), then this is my favorite.

 3a)
 http://s226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/?action=viewcurrent=ApacheVelocityTools3Solid.png
 3b)
 http://i226.photobucket.com/albums/dd53/shadowpwner/ApacheVelocityTools3Gradient.png

 If you don't like any of the logos, please speak up so I can hopefully
 design another one that you think looks good. :)

a blend between #1 and #2 would be nice, if you're up for it. :)

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