Re: [edk2] [Patch 1/6] MdeModulePkg/Tcp4Dxe: Add the clarification compared to TcpDxe in NetworkPkg.

2018-09-25 Thread Laszlo Ersek
On 09/25/18 05:44, Jiaxin Wu wrote:
> Ref: https://bugzilla.tianocore.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1205
> 
> This patch is to add the driver usage/difference clarification
> compared to TcpDxe in NetworkPkg.
> 
> Cc: Ye Ting 
> Cc: Fu Siyuan 
> Cc: Laszlo Ersek 
> Contributed-under: TianoCore Contribution Agreement 1.1
> Signed-off-by: Wu Jiaxin 
> ---
>  MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf | 12 +++-
>  1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
> 
> diff --git a/MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf 
> b/MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf
> index b54321caaa..0561eb7421 100644
> --- a/MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf
> +++ b/MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf
> @@ -1,10 +1,20 @@
>  ## @file
>  #  This module produces EFI TCPv4 Protocol and EFI TCPv4 Service Binding 
> Protocol.
>  #
>  #  This module produces EFI TCPv4(Transmission Control Protocol version 4) 
> Protocol
> -#  upon EFI IPv4 Protocol, to provide basic TCPv4 I/O services.
> +#  upon EFI IPv4 Protocol, to provide basic TCPv4 I/O services. This driver 
> only 
> +#  supports IPv4 network stack.
> +#
> +#  Notes: 
> +#  1) This driver can't co-work with the TcpDxe driver in NetworkPkg. 
> +#  2) This driver might have some issues that have been fixed in the TcpDxe 
> driver 
> +# in NetworkPkg. 
> +#  3) This driver supports less feature than the TcpDxe driver in NetworkPkg 
> (e.g. IPv6, 
> +# TCP Cancel function). 
> +#  4) TcpDxe driver in NetworkPkg is recommanded to use instead of this one 
> even both 
> +# of them can be used.

Sorry, a few more suggestions:

- "recommanded to use" --> "recommended for use" (both typo fix and
grammar fix)

- "even" --> "even though".

Anyway I don't think it's necessary to repost the patch just because of
this.

Thanks!
Laszlo



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>  #  This program and the accompanying materials
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Re: [edk2] [Patch 1/6] MdeModulePkg/Tcp4Dxe: Add the clarification compared to TcpDxe in NetworkPkg.

2018-09-25 Thread Laszlo Ersek
On 09/25/18 05:44, Jiaxin Wu wrote:
> Ref: https://bugzilla.tianocore.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1205
> 
> This patch is to add the driver usage/difference clarification
> compared to TcpDxe in NetworkPkg.
> 
> Cc: Ye Ting 
> Cc: Fu Siyuan 
> Cc: Laszlo Ersek 
> Contributed-under: TianoCore Contribution Agreement 1.1
> Signed-off-by: Wu Jiaxin 
> ---
>  MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf | 12 +++-
>  1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
> 
> diff --git a/MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf 
> b/MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf
> index b54321caaa..0561eb7421 100644
> --- a/MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf
> +++ b/MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf
> @@ -1,10 +1,20 @@
>  ## @file
>  #  This module produces EFI TCPv4 Protocol and EFI TCPv4 Service Binding 
> Protocol.
>  #
>  #  This module produces EFI TCPv4(Transmission Control Protocol version 4) 
> Protocol
> -#  upon EFI IPv4 Protocol, to provide basic TCPv4 I/O services.
> +#  upon EFI IPv4 Protocol, to provide basic TCPv4 I/O services. This driver 
> only 
> +#  supports IPv4 network stack.
> +#
> +#  Notes: 
> +#  1) This driver can't co-work with the TcpDxe driver in NetworkPkg. 
> +#  2) This driver might have some issues that have been fixed in the TcpDxe 
> driver 
> +# in NetworkPkg. 
> +#  3) This driver supports less feature than the TcpDxe driver in NetworkPkg 
> (e.g. IPv6, 
> +# TCP Cancel function). 

I suggest replacing "less feature" with "fewer features".

Looks good to me, otherwise.

Reviewed-by: Laszlo Ersek 

Thanks!
Laszlo

> +#  4) TcpDxe driver in NetworkPkg is recommanded to use instead of this one 
> even both 
> +# of them can be used.
>  #
>  #  Copyright (c) 2006 - 2018, Intel Corporation. All rights reserved.
>  #  This program and the accompanying materials
>  #  are licensed and made available under the terms and conditions of the BSD 
> License
>  #  which accompanies this distribution. The full text of the license may be 
> found at
> 

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[edk2] [Patch 1/6] MdeModulePkg/Tcp4Dxe: Add the clarification compared to TcpDxe in NetworkPkg.

2018-09-24 Thread Jiaxin Wu
Ref: https://bugzilla.tianocore.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1205

This patch is to add the driver usage/difference clarification
compared to TcpDxe in NetworkPkg.

Cc: Ye Ting 
Cc: Fu Siyuan 
Cc: Laszlo Ersek 
Contributed-under: TianoCore Contribution Agreement 1.1
Signed-off-by: Wu Jiaxin 
---
 MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf | 12 +++-
 1 file changed, 11 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf 
b/MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf
index b54321caaa..0561eb7421 100644
--- a/MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf
+++ b/MdeModulePkg/Universal/Network/Tcp4Dxe/Tcp4Dxe.inf
@@ -1,10 +1,20 @@
 ## @file
 #  This module produces EFI TCPv4 Protocol and EFI TCPv4 Service Binding 
Protocol.
 #
 #  This module produces EFI TCPv4(Transmission Control Protocol version 4) 
Protocol
-#  upon EFI IPv4 Protocol, to provide basic TCPv4 I/O services.
+#  upon EFI IPv4 Protocol, to provide basic TCPv4 I/O services. This driver 
only 
+#  supports IPv4 network stack.
+#
+#  Notes: 
+#  1) This driver can't co-work with the TcpDxe driver in NetworkPkg. 
+#  2) This driver might have some issues that have been fixed in the TcpDxe 
driver 
+# in NetworkPkg. 
+#  3) This driver supports less feature than the TcpDxe driver in NetworkPkg 
(e.g. IPv6, 
+# TCP Cancel function). 
+#  4) TcpDxe driver in NetworkPkg is recommanded to use instead of this one 
even both 
+# of them can be used.
 #
 #  Copyright (c) 2006 - 2018, Intel Corporation. All rights reserved.
 #  This program and the accompanying materials
 #  are licensed and made available under the terms and conditions of the BSD 
License
 #  which accompanies this distribution. The full text of the license may be 
found at
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