Re: [Emu] More comments for eap-tunnel-method

2012-10-10 Thread Hao Zhou (hzhou)
I think an optional length of Outer TLV field (controlled by the flag bit)
would be preferable.

On 10/9/12 7:37 PM, Jim Schaad i...@augustcellars.com wrote:

I would be really against the idea that I needed to crack the TLS data
blob
to figure this out.   Either adding a length for the TLS data field, or a
length of the Outer TLV data would be preferable to me.  If you did the
second, then it would only affect processing on the first two messages.

Jim

 -Original Message-
 From: Hao Zhou (hzhou) [mailto:hz...@cisco.com]
 Sent: Tuesday, October 09, 2012 12:46 PM
 To: Jim Schaad; emu@ietf.org; draft-ietf-emu-eap-tunnel-
 met...@tools.ietf.org
 Subject: Re: [Emu] More comments for eap-tunnel-method
 
 That is the current thinking, and the only concrete use case for Outer
TLV
 now is in the 1st message from server to peer with no TLS data. I am ok
with
 adding another optional TLS data length field.
 
 On 10/9/12 3:31 PM, Jim Schaad i...@augustcellars.com wrote:
 
 There does not seem to be anything in the TEAP document about the
 length of
 the TLS data.   Are you suggesting that one should crack the TLS data
blob
 to find the length of that data blob?
 
 Jim
 
 
  -Original Message-
  From: Hao Zhou (hzhou) [mailto:hz...@cisco.com]
  Sent: Tuesday, October 09, 2012 11:43 AM
  To: Jim Schaad; emu@ietf.org; draft-ietf-emu-eap-tunnel-
  met...@tools.ietf.org
  Subject: Re: [Emu] More comments for eap-tunnel-method
 
  Jim:
 
  Please see comments inline below.
 
  On 10/8/12 1:11 AM, Jim Schaad i...@augustcellars.com wrote:
 
  
  
   -Original Message-
   From: Hao Zhou (hzhou) [mailto:hz...@cisco.com]
   Sent: Thursday, October 04, 2012 2:56 PM
   To: Jim Schaad; emu@ietf.org; draft-ietf-emu-eap-tunnel-
   met...@tools.ietf.org
   Subject: Re: [Emu] More comments for eap-tunnel-method
  
   Jim:
  
   Thanks for the review. Please see my comments below.
  
   On 9/30/12 2:01 PM, Jim Schaad i...@augustcellars.com wrote:
  
   1.  Should the Message Length field be present if the TLS Data
   field is absent?
   [HZ] According to the text in the draft, the message length field
   should
  only
   be present if the L bit is set, usually for fragmented packets. In
   those
  cases,
   the TLS data field will be present, not absent. The only case TLS
   data
  will be
   absent is when empty TEAP packet it is used to
indicate TEAP acknowledgement for either a fragmented
 message,
a TLS Alert message or a TLS Finished message. So the
   message
  length
   field is not needed. We can clarify that in the draft.
  
  
  [JLS]  I am not clear - are you saying that the first sever message
  sent with just TLVs cannot be fragmented?
  [HZ] No, they can be fragmented. However, currently, Outer TLVs are
 only  allowed in the first 2 messages in TEAP exchanges, 1st server to
 peer with  TEAP start, and 2nd message client to server with
 Client_hello. It is
 unlikely
  the first server message will have lots of outer TLVs that needs the
 fragmentation (only one or two outer TLV is being defined so far). The
 2nd  message from client to server with client _hello might if the
 ticket
 extension
  is too big, but unlikely.
 
  
  [JLS]  There is a potential issue in the way that the Message Length
  field is described.  For finding the location of the Outer TLVs it
  provides the length of the TLS Data field, but the internal
  description says that it gives the length of the message data in the
  event of a
  fragmented message.
  If the first client response message is both fragmented on length
  and contains TLVs, then the message length field must be the length
  of the TLS data in order to find the Outer TLV data but that means
  it is not the length of all of the fragmented data.  This is not an
  issue after the first pair of messages as the Outer TLVs are no
  longer allowed at that point.
  [HZ] The message length is the total length of the TEAP packet if
 fragmented,
  to provide a hint for the peer to allocate the buffer. The start of
  the
 outer
  TLV can be calculated from the EAP message length and length field
 inside  the TLS data, not dependent on the Message Length field. The
 current draft  text in Section 4.1 Outer TLVs description incorrectly
 refers to message  length field, will need to be corrected.
  Since Outer TLVs only occur in the first 2 TEAP exchanges, the TLS
 data is
 one
  type and relatively simple,  it should not be too hard to figure out
  the
 start.
  
  [JLS] I presume that the Length needs to be present only if the
  message is fragmented as a hint to the receiver on the length of the
  buffer to allocate as I don't remember any error checks that the
  length of the message match the re-constructed message from the
  fragments (and if it did then the previous paragraph makes that
  faulty).  Should there be an error check on the message length w/
  the length of the re-constructed buffer?
  [HZ] I don't know if current TLS 

Re: [Emu] Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-tunnel-method-00

2012-10-10 Thread Jim Schaad
I think that picks up all of my current comments.  Looking forward to seeing
the draft update.

 

Jim

 

 

From: Hao Zhou (hzhou) [mailto:hz...@cisco.com] 
Sent: Wednesday, October 10, 2012 11:15 AM
To: Jim Schaad
Cc: emu@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Emu] Review of draft-ietf-emu-eap-tunnel-method-00

 

Jim:

 

Please see comments below inline.

 

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