Reviewer: David Schinazi Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-emu-eap-noob-04 Reviewer: David Schinazi Review Date: 2021-05-14 IETF LC End Date: 2021-04-13 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Well-written document. Major issues: None Minor issues: In s5.6 "AAA administrators may need to recognize the name" isn't clear to me. If this document mentions that administrators may need to recognize the name, it should specify what actions the administrators need to take. Nits/editorial comments: None _______________________________________________ Emu mailing list Emu@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/emu
