[FairfieldLife] Re: Haiku by John Cooper Clarke

2013-09-21 Thread turquoiseb

s3raphita passes along:

  Seventeen syllables?

  OK, seventeen syllables...
  h...
  aw, fuck it

--- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, Doc wrote:

 To convey one's moods
 in seventeen syllables
 is very diffic


Very funny, both of them. I still like my brother's Email Blues haiku:

Oh no
Yet another spam about penis length
I mean
How do they know?


The only haiku that came to me was this one, and I had to cheat a
little with the Elizabethan pronunciation of the last word to even
get to seventeen syllables.  :-)

My epitaph
In six words
Better than I could have imaginéd







Re: [FairfieldLife] Re: Haiku by John Cooper Clarke

2013-09-21 Thread Share Long
I would LOVE it, and also would attempt follow the haiku rules, if it turned 
out that there is a physiological reason for the 5/7/5 formula for haiku. For 
example, iambic pentameter seems to coincide with normal breathing. Am I 
missing something?





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s3raphita passes along:

  Seventeen syllables?
  OK, seventeen syllables...
  h...
  aw, fuck it
--- In FairfieldLife@yahoogroups.com, Doc wrote:

 To convey one's moods
 in seventeen syllables
 is very diffic


Very funny, both of them. I still like my brother's Email Blues haiku:

Oh no
Yet another spam about penis length
I mean
How do they know?


The only haiku that came to me was this one, and I had to cheat a
little with the Elizabethan pronunciation of the last word to even
get to seventeen syllables.  :-)

My epitaph
In six words
Better than I could have imaginéd





 

[FairfieldLife] RE: Haiku by John Cooper Clarke

2013-09-20 Thread doctordumbass