Re: Round 2 has ended

2008-02-13 Thread Uno Engborg
The sulphur images looks nice. It's calm and nonintrusive Speaking of calm,
I hope we never se animated waves as a background.That would be extremely
annoying. I also think that the color of the wave is more than a bit too
bright, It sort of reminds me of the early releases of CentOS.

Among the various sulphur images, I would prefer the ones that either have
just a fedora logo, or just the sulphur chrystals, combining
the logo and the chrystal is a bit too much. (and a small logo on the
sulphur chrystal could easily be taken for an icon, and confuse the user)

Great work!

2008/2/13, Nicu Buculei [EMAIL PROTECTED]:

 Round 2 has ended, and we have two proposals standing (the others are
 either pulled by their authors or are not fulfilling the requirements):

 - Waves, by Martin with Mo's sulfuric modification:
 http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/F9Themes/Waves

 - Shoowa, by Lyua: http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/F9Themes/Shoowa

 I blogged about them, I hope we will get better fedback this time:
 http://nicubunu.blogspot.com/2008/02/fedora-8-artwork-round-2.html

 (in fact I am sure we will get better feedback, I recently joined FWN as
 a writer covering the Art list, so I will ensure this is covered by
 FWN's next issue).

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Re: A Thought About F9 Artwork

2008-01-03 Thread Uno Engborg
2008/1/3, Jeff Spaleta [EMAIL PROTECTED]:


 The rest of the graphics (except maybe splash screens) I would agree
 deserve refinement because they serve a more functional role. Users
 interact with window borders and buttons and icons and whatnot. But
 the desktop background itself is purely expressive.



No, the background is much more than purely expressive. It  constituetes
the background
for icons placed on the desktop. As such it can provide landmarks for
finding
a certain icon. As many users use the desktop for storing files files it is
also
of utter importance that it is not too conspicious, so that it disturbs the
user.

In essence it should be there but not be noticed all that much. E.g it can
be
a good idea to avoid figurative images. It is also important to make the
smallest
detail in the image much larger than the icon size, or it could make it
harder
for visually impaired people to differentiate between the background and
icon
contours. i.e. it acts like camoflage.

Some kind of easy identifyable subtle pattern is good especially if it is a
bit
unsymetric an unrepeated. That way it provides good landmarks to help the
user remember how his icons are placed.


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Re: Link for official F9 theme proposal

2007-12-15 Thread Uno Engborg

Jeff Spaleta skrev:

On Dec 12, 2007 3:44 AM, David Nielsen [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
  

I for one, really like what we have in Fedora 8 and I would like to suggest 
keeping and
working on perfecting it instead of replacing the artwork every 6 months
entirely.



Without making a judgment as to the quality or attractiveness of any
release's artwork
I would say that making the default desktop image distinctly different
from at least the previous release helps immensely from a release
marketting perspective.  The default desktop image is the most
identifiable thing when skimming screenshots in something like a
review or across-the-room glances when using computers in public
spaces.  High quality isn't good enough to catch the eye from release
to release, releases need to be visually distinctive in order to imply
new hotness
  

Yes, making changes markets the new release. Not changing it, helps
market the Fedora brand, as people will recognize Fedora when they see 
it regardless

of what release it is.

High quality have been enough to promote e.g. Ubuntu. I think you have too
little faith in that Fedora developers will be able to provide the 
novelties and increase

in polish of each new release to make people upgrade.



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Re: Link for official F9 theme proposal

2007-12-12 Thread Uno Engborg

Jakub 'Livio' Rusinek skrev:

Same artwork for few releases? It would boring like the Ubuntu theme...
I'm sick of Ubuntu's theme. I love Fedora 8 theme - professional in
every inch.
  
For a desktop theme, boring is good. The user should not be disturbed by 
cool
graphics while he is working. The best desktop, is the one the user 
notice the least. It

should just be there for him when he needs it.

And yes, I'm sick of Ubuntus theme too, but at least I emmediately know 
that it is Ubuntu when I see it,
and that is very good from branding perspective. You can say that Ubuntu 
have found its identity.


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Re: Link for official F9 theme proposal

2007-12-12 Thread Uno Engborg

David Nielsen skrev:

Em Qua, 2007-12-12 às 07:33 +0100, Jakub 'Livio' Rusinek escreveu:
  

Freedom? I think best symbol of freedom is pidgeon or statue of liberty
(or something like that).

Maybe an city, like New York, the liberty statue and a pidgeon flying
over :] ?



That would be a downright insulting display of american nationalistic
pride to plenty of people.

We really need to select culturally neutral images, I for one, really
like what we have in Fedora 8 and I would like to suggest keeping and
working on perfecting it instead of replacing the artwork every 6 months
entirely.

- David
  

Yes, I really agree on both your statements.  The Fedora 8  theme is the
first theme that have looked really professional in a long time. Lets keep
it and maybe polish it slightly.

Keeping the same theme for several releases will also help to build the 
brand.

A Rolls Royce model doesn't change appearance from one year to the next.
They don't need to as they sell a quality product, and it is good that 
people
recognize it.  The same should go for Fedora. Ubuntu have tried it, and 
it seam

to work for them.

The Fedora 8 theme would be a very good base for such a long lasting theme
as it is very neutral and businesslike.

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Re: Background :)

2007-04-09 Thread Uno Engborg

Mola Pahnadayan skrev:

Hi all ,
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/52789742/

My devianArt pageh http://mola-mp.deviantart.com/ ;)


Looks great!

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Re: alternate logo

2007-02-22 Thread Uno Engborg

Nicu Buculei skrev:

Paul W. Frields wrote:


The
frustration that some of the community members have expressed is
understandable, and we've tried to carry your concerns to all the
parties involved.  But unfortunately, we haven't been completely
successful, and to make a long story short, we've had to concede the
default release theme work to the Desktop group inside Red Hat.


The main leverage used by the RH Desktop Team to kick us out was the 
fear that the community will incorrectly use the trademarks and the 
logo [1] so I call the people unhappy with this policy at a brainstorm 
to create an *alternate* logo and use it in our *alternative* works 
and produce better desktop theming  which I hope will please the users 
and shame RHDT.


[1] - 
http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Board/Meetings/2007-01-16?action=AttachFiledo=gettarget=fedora-board-20070116.txt 



I would say, leave out the logo alltogether. The less branding, the more 
room for artistic freedom.
Putting shame where shame belongs in public will not help.  Revenge is 
always counter productive.



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Re: Artwork conversations

2007-02-16 Thread Uno Engborg

Rahul Sundaram wrote:


Nicu Buculei wrote:

I dont consider it a step back. In both cases the concepts was drawn 
and worked up a team and Diana Fong did the final work. The 
difference here might that Mola talked over IRC while John Baer 
didnt. That's just different working styles and prefered modes of 
interaction.



OK, so using unarchived and closed channels is preferred.



We dont have artificially invent issues. It is a completely public 
channel. Archives are available if you want them.



Actually, this is a little more than artificially invented issue.  The 
problem with IRC is that conversations take place in real time.
This is a problem for projects that may have particepants in different 
parts of the world with different time zones.


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Re: Artwork conversations

2007-02-16 Thread Uno Engborg

Rahul Sundaram wrote:


Uno Engborg wrote:


Rahul Sundaram wrote:


Nicu Buculei wrote:

I dont consider it a step back. In both cases the concepts was 
drawn and worked up a team and Diana Fong did the final work. The 
difference here might that Mola talked over IRC while John Baer 
didnt. That's just different working styles and prefered modes of 
interaction.




OK, so using unarchived and closed channels is preferred.




We dont have artificially invent issues. It is a completely public 
channel. Archives are available if you want them.




Actually, this is a little more than artificially invented issue.  
The problem with IRC is that conversations take place in real time.
This is a problem for projects that may have particepants in 
different parts of the world with different time zones.



Sure but that is a completely different issue which in no way makes 
the channel closed. It is not hard to setup bots which automatically 
archives all the conversations in the channel. I suspect there might 
already be public services which do just that.



Archives makes the channel open to see, but in a community project it 
must also be open to participate even if you happen to be in another 
time zone.


I doubt very much that people using IRC will start their work day by 
scanning the backlog of IRC messages that have taken place during the 
night, answers them and then wait to the next day for their answer. 


/uno

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Re: A sad day for Fedora, A disappointment for Open Source

2007-02-13 Thread Uno Engborg

John Baer skrev:

Nicu wrote:
  

Ok, I hope I qualify as someone.
I directed you some days ago at http://www.isity.net/blog/?p=57
Development on the Fedora 7 theme is ongoing but not on this list but 
behind some closed doors and we are not invited to the party.





This is truly a sad day for Fedora and a disappointment for the
community of Open Source.

If Fedora did not want our help simply state it, close down the list
server, call it good. Diana certainly has the skill and talent to do the
artwork and obviously doesn't need our help.
  


Unfortunately I don't agree with you. Diana seam to be a fine artist, 
you are right in that. The problem is, that it takes more than being a 
fine artist to make a good desktop theme. In fact being a  fine artist 
may even be a problem as most good art is about making a statement, 
while creating a desktop theme is more like making visual elevator music.
It should be there, it should look reasonably  good  but not draw too 
much attention or create any major mood swings of the observer, it 
should help the user find  the way in the system. The balance between 
being dull and very good is very delicate.


To get it right,  you need a little knowledge in HCI besides good 
artistic skills, and judging from previous theme disasters in Fedora, 
Diana doesn't seam to have such HCI skills.


I'm really glad I didn't discover the Fedora art project, until it was 
too late to make any new contributions, if I had made
such an effort as many others on this list have done, I would have been 
seriously pissed off.  If English had been my native language  I 
probably had written some articles to /. or osnews.com about this, to 
warn people from wasting time on

Fedora when they ask for help.

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Re: Flying High with Fedora 7

2007-02-09 Thread Uno Engborg

John Baer skrev:

Uno wrote:
  

Now it would be nice if the lighter blue color of the Clouds
wallpaper 
could rub off on other

parts of the GUI, e.g. such as login screen.




Now that I have a revised RHGB submission in place I can take some time
to look at the GDM login. I am unclear of your vision but I believe you
want something like the GDM login at this link.

http://art.gnome.org/themes/gdm_greeter/1229

Is this correct? If not, can you point me toward something to help me
see your desire.

  
Actually, what I was looking for, was the Clouds login screen from in 
the link from your
previous post.   I just wanted a more unified look in varios parts of 
the system, but that seam

to be fixed already.

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Re: Flying High with Fedora 7

2007-02-04 Thread Uno Engborg

John Baer wrote:

All,

I hope I am not wallpapering all of you to death but IMO it is critical
to get the wall paper correct. Struggling with the direction *monolith*
idea I decided to try something from my original thoughts and the hot
air balloons in the clouds.

Given the chance to start over I also decided to *lighten* the colors as
requested early on. The theme is not a bold as the *monolith* thread but
it works.

I welcome your comments.

http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/FC7Themes/Fc7ThemeProposalFlyingHighRound2

Cheers,

John


  
The clouds wallpaper looks VERY good. Almost no small details that could 
hide icons. Yet, enough
detail  to provide landmarks to memorize icon positions. It's lighter 
this means less contrasts between
the desktop and document windows that usually are light in color. This 
means less strain on the

eyes.  And above all, it looks beautiful and discrete in the same time.

Now it would be nice if the lighter blue color of the Clouds wallpaper 
could rub off on other

parts of the GUI, e.g. such as login screen.


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Re: Flying High with Fedora 7

2007-02-03 Thread Uno Engborg

John Baer wrote:

All,

Still trying to stay 3-D and bold, I posted a new wallpaper with no
monolith for your consideration. Let me know your thoughts and thank you
for your comments.

http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/FC7Themes/Fc7ThemeProposalFlyingHighRound2
  


Well, at least my friends doesn't refer to it as the gravestone theme 
anymore. However, now the blue blowtorch flame like thing in the center 
gets a bit too dominating, at least at the bottom close to the cloud 
where it almost looks like a solid blue body.


Another thing, the image is very static (with or without monolith). You 
divide the screen equally in a right and a left part. If we expect users 
to use whatever artifacts we put in the background as landmarks for 
finding icons, that would be easier if we had a slight asymmetry.
This is how our brain works, and probably why you often see golden cut 
size relations in art.

A slight asymmetry often feels  more dynamic and interesting.

I would also suggest making the balloons a bit larger. That way icons 
will be easier to spot.  They would also be large enough to provide 
landmarks for navigation instead of the blue flame, in case you removed it.


Another suggestion is to change the places of the  balloons, so that the 
lower balloon is  centered (with respect to left/right axis) somewhere 
close to the clouds , where the flame is now.   That way you would avoid 
the exact divide in two equal left and right side of the screen.  I 
would also suggest that you flip the position of the balloons so that 
the upper balloon is the rightmost one. That way it would probably also 
look better together with the normal computer  and trash icons you 
normally have to the left side of the screen. In other words the screen 
image including standard icons would look more balanced.


If you decide to keep the flame, does it have to go up at 90 degree 
angle to the clouds?
By tilting it a little e.g. to the right, you would get a more dynamic 
looking image, that
looked less like the start of a nuclear attack. By placing one balloon 
in front of the flame

and one behind it you could increase the sense of depth in the image.

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Re: Flying High with Fedora 7 - More

2007-02-02 Thread Uno Engborg

John Baer wrote:

All,

Added a RHGB screen to match *more 3d* wallpaper.

http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/FC7Themes/Fc7ThemeProposalFlyingHighRound2

:)

John
  

Looks good.

BTW. The monolith, on the standard desktop background, without the blue 
balloon outline looks much better than the one with the balloon, as it 
gives a much calmer impression. It looks a little more 3D-ish than the 
one with the balloon, this is also a good thing.


Though, I  still think that you would be better off without the 
gravestone  monolith altogether.
If you decide to keep it, try to make it slightly more 3D-ish. That way 
you would get a better feeling of depth in the picture.


Actually the best screen to use as standard desktop would be the one 
with the clouds up in the top right corner. 
(flyinghigh-r2_fullscreen-normal-ratio.svg). It is calm with no 
nonsense. In fact it is even a bit boring which actually is a good thing 
for desktop backgrounds as it will not draw attention from your work. 
Perhaps the balloons and clouds could have a little smother 3D look though.


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Re: Flying High with Fedora 7 - More 3D

2007-02-01 Thread Uno Engborg
tor 2007-02-01 klockan 20:53 -0500 skrev John Baer:
 Posted a revised wallpaper to the white board with more 3d elements.
 
 http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/FC7Themes/Fc7ThemeProposalFlyingHighRound2
 
 +1 or -1
 
 John


The new 3d stuff looks great. However, drop the Monolith it only makes
sense to Stanley Kubrick fans. To others, it looks more like a
gravestone.  Apart from bad grave associations, it draws a little too
much attention to itself.

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Re: Flying High Preview 2 Started

2007-01-26 Thread Uno Engborg

Jiri Jakub Masek wrote:

Hi John, there are mixed two styles, *technical drawing* and 
*monolith* in RHGB,GDM Splash and GDM/KDE Desktop, I like the idea of 
*technical drawing*, so, follow it.



Agree, the technical drawing style looks very good. Could just be that 
it is not so dark. On the downside, it may give the wrong signals
To many people Linux is something that is tool technical, perhaps we 
should avoid remind them of that. But it do look good.


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Re: Branding Wallpaper

2007-01-26 Thread Uno Engborg

John Baer wrote:


Nicu wrote:
 


I think this is excessive and unneeded branding: both for Fedora and
the 
Desktop Environment. 
   



Nicu,

Would your preference be no GDM/KDE branding but keep the fedora
branding. Or... would you prefer all branding removed?
 



To me, less branding would be better. People who see our artwork have 
allready chosen Fedora and probably doesn't need to
be reminded of it all that much.  It is also slightly disrespectful to 
high jack splash screens of other projekts such as OpenOffice, or
KDE apps unless the fedora team have made some significant contribution 
to that app that makes it noticalbly different from

the uppstream version.

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Re: Usability aspects on desktop themse.

2007-01-03 Thread Uno Engborg

John Baer wrote:


Uno,

Thank you for your comments. I have been performing some usability tests
with the Flying High Theme and the results are posted on the preview
page.

http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Fc7ThemeProposalFlyingHighPreview
 


Not bad!
But the right cloud, the one over the balloon, looks a little too much 
like an animal
of some sort. I sort picture it as pig. Perhaps we could get it a little 
more cumulus like.


I also think that the colors are a bit dark, and it gives me a little 
sad impression.
If the background was a little lighter there would be less contrast 
between the balloon and the

background. This would make it a little less in the face of the user.

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Usability aspects on desktop themse.

2007-01-01 Thread Uno Engborg
Are you still interested in feedback on fc7 desktop themes?

If so, I would say that the only theme that works well from
usability and accessability perspetive would be the Fedora flying high
theme

The reason for this one being better is that, there are relatively
few details and the details are larger than the size of icon.
This means that there will be no camoflage effect.

It is also quite even in colour. This means that icon text will
be very readable regardless where you put your icon.

There are also distinct areas with slightly different shades of
blue depending on where on the screen an icon is placed.
This makes it easier to memorize the position of an icon.



The second best themes alternative would probably be Fedora Borealis,
but please make the f:s and other items on the desktop a little larger
so that visually challanged people can differentiate them from icons.
Also make the aurora a little bit darker so that icon text gets better
contrast.

I would also suggest making the mountain at the bottom a little less
symetric, that way it will be easier to remember where you place an
icon.


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