Re: Picture Book Mockup
-BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE- Hash: SHA1 Ian Weller a écrit : | On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: | Setting in critic mode: | Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? | Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph? | Title Chapter 2: Friends is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it | might help. | | This is a *mockup*. I'm also extremely picky about em dashes, and we'll | make sure we use those correctly in the finished book. :D Blame my prof for torturing me for using hyphen for mockup. - -- Luya Tshimbalanga Graphic Web Designer P: (604) 682-6618 E: l...@fedoraproject.org W: http://thefinalzone.net -BEGIN PGP SIGNATURE- Version: GnuPG v1.4.9 (GNU/Linux) Comment: Using GnuPG with Fedora - http://enigmail.mozdev.org iEYEARECAAYFAkmw/pMACgkQa10Jb0NOz+FxjgCfSe//imcJ9tSFk5rFCZ6Eu3oh 7rMAn1Yzxl9hRiv3KeALrOW4ilInvmRm =v7JS -END PGP SIGNATURE- ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Picture Book Mockup
On Fri, 2009-03-06 at 02:44 -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: Ian Weller a écrit : | On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: | Setting in critic mode: | Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? | Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph? | Title Chapter 2: Friends is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it | might help. | | This is a *mockup*. I'm also extremely picky about em dashes, and we'll | make sure we use those correctly in the finished book. :D Blame my prof for torturing me for using hyphen for mockup. Well, it makes things more effective when correct typography is used right from the start (hence why you prof. has been torturing you for hyphens even in mock-ups) ;-) Martin signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Picture Book Mockup
Máirín Duffy wrote: http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/collateral/picturebook/mocks/friendsmockup.png The general layout is pretty much the same I was thinking about. I only think it may be too much blue, I would like the photo bigger and less empty (blue) space, something more like https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Image:Friendsmockup_N.png (however, I am not sure about chaper2: friends being on top of the photo) Another possibility to to somehow use the icons for each F: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Image:Friendsmockup_N1.png Let the games begin! :) My concept for the theme of the book here is a guide on how to be Fedora. There would be 4 chapters, freedom, friends, features, first. The photos for each chapter will have the model's perspective on the chapter's four f, talking about how that f affects their life and affects their role in Fedora. Then below that, per picture, we could suggest to the readers how they can bring that into their own life with a suggestion. Kind of a call to action. This is a good concept. And if we don't have a quote from the model, we can write something by ourselves, maybe a neutral text or a quote from someone who know the model. -- nicu :: http://nicubunu.ro :: http://nicubunu.blogspot.com/ photography: http://photoblog.nicubunu.ro/ my Fedora stuff: http://fedora.nicubunu.ro/ ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Picture Book Mockup
On Wed, 2009-03-04 at 16:18 -0600, Ian Weller wrote: On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: Setting in critic mode: Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph? Title Chapter 2: Friends is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it might help. This is a *mockup*. I'm also extremely picky about em dashes, and we'll make sure we use those correctly in the finished book. :D Heh, are em dashes actually used in English? In Czech we use only hyphens, - (like in screen-cast), and en dashes, – (when separating sentences, denoting ranges, etc.)... Em dashes, —, seem over too long (to me) ;-) Although, for some reason my evolution displays both the en dash and em dash with same length (which is wrong)... Martin signature.asc Description: This is a digitally signed message part ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Picture Book Mockup
On Wed, Mar 04, 2009 at 11:46:12PM +0100, Martin Sourada wrote: On Wed, 2009-03-04 at 16:18 -0600, Ian Weller wrote: On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 11:07:38PM -0800, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote: Setting in critic mode: Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph? Title Chapter 2: Friends is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it might help. This is a *mockup*. I'm also extremely picky about em dashes, and we'll make sure we use those correctly in the finished book. :D Heh, are em dashes actually used in English? In Czech we use only hyphens, - (like in screen-cast), and en dashes, – (when separating sentences, denoting ranges, etc.)... Em dashes, —, seem over too long (to me) ;-) Although, for some reason my evolution displays both the en dash and em dash with same length (which is wrong)... In English typography, I've seen em dashes used far more often than not to separate clauses of interjection -- like this one! -- but whereas ASCII text generally represents an em dash as three hyphens (---), most people type it as two or (shudder) one. My mutt client displays your hyphen, en dash, and emdash above as three different lengths as intended. -- Paul W. Frieldshttp://paul.frields.org/ gpg fingerprint: 3DA6 A0AC 6D58 FEC4 0233 5906 ACDB C937 BD11 3717 http://redhat.com/ - - - - http://pfrields.fedorapeople.org/ irc.freenode.net: stickster @ #fedora-docs, #fedora-devel, #fredlug pgpm9mHpBrMJ5.pgp Description: PGP signature ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Picture Book Mockup
Il giorno mar, 03/03/2009 alle 22.44 -0600, Ian Weller ha scritto: On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 01:41:43PM -0800, Máirín Duffy wrote: Let the games begin! :) My concept for the theme of the book here is a guide on how to be Fedora. There would be 4 chapters, freedom, friends, features, first. The photos for each chapter will have the model's perspective on the chapter's four f, talking about how that f affects their life and affects their role in Fedora. Then below that, per picture, we could suggest to the readers how they can bring that into their own life with a suggestion. Kind of a call to action. Can we organize all the mockups here: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Category:Picture_book_mockups Just add [[Category:Picture book mockups]] to the description of the uploaded PNG on the wiki. You can upload the SVG too, but link to it from the PNG's description; don't include the category tag on SVGs. I personally quite like N and N1, not the last template though. But the whole idea is really cool, definitely! Cheers, Mario ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Picture Book Mockup
http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/collateral/picturebook/mocks/friendsmockup.png (SVG in same directory) Let the games begin! :) My concept for the theme of the book here is a guide on how to be Fedora. There would be 4 chapters, freedom, friends, features, first. The photos for each chapter will have the model's perspective on the chapter's four f, talking about how that f affects their life and affects their role in Fedora. Then below that, per picture, we could suggest to the readers how they can bring that into their own life with a suggestion. Kind of a call to action. What do you think? ~m ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Picture Book Mockup
On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 01:41:43PM -0800, Máirín Duffy wrote: http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/collateral/picturebook/mocks/friendsmockup.png (SVG in same directory) Let the games begin! :) My concept for the theme of the book here is a guide on how to be Fedora. There would be 4 chapters, freedom, friends, features, first. The photos for each chapter will have the model's perspective on the chapter's four f, talking about how that f affects their life and affects their role in Fedora. Then below that, per picture, we could suggest to the readers how they can bring that into their own life with a suggestion. Kind of a call to action. What do you think? yay yay yay :D See also: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Picture_book So currently we're looking for design mockups as well as how all the stories should tie into the four foundations, etc. We really need as much collaboration on this as we can get. If you've got extra time, please help us out! :D -- Ian Weller ianwel...@gmail.com http://ianweller.org GnuPG fingerprint: E51E 0517 7A92 70A2 4226 B050 87ED 7C97 EFA8 4A36 Technology is a word that describes something that doesn't work yet. ~ Douglas Adams pgp1RCp3fOypp.pgp Description: PGP signature ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Picture Book Mockup
On Tue, Mar 03, 2009 at 01:41:43PM -0800, Máirín Duffy wrote: Let the games begin! :) My concept for the theme of the book here is a guide on how to be Fedora. There would be 4 chapters, freedom, friends, features, first. The photos for each chapter will have the model's perspective on the chapter's four f, talking about how that f affects their life and affects their role in Fedora. Then below that, per picture, we could suggest to the readers how they can bring that into their own life with a suggestion. Kind of a call to action. Can we organize all the mockups here: https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Category:Picture_book_mockups Just add [[Category:Picture book mockups]] to the description of the uploaded PNG on the wiki. You can upload the SVG too, but link to it from the PNG's description; don't include the category tag on SVGs. -- Ian Weller ianwel...@gmail.com http://ianweller.org GnuPG fingerprint: E51E 0517 7A92 70A2 4226 B050 87ED 7C97 EFA8 4A36 Technology is a word that describes something that doesn't work yet. ~ Douglas Adams pgpPB7f9ahRZe.pgp Description: PGP signature ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Picture Book Mockup
This is awesome Máirín! Love the concept of splitting into the four Fs and getting some personality of the individual in there. Very cool stuff... - Original Message - From: Máirín Duffy mai...@linuxgrrl.com To: fedora-marketing-l...@redhat.com Cc: fedora-art-list@redhat.com Sent: Tuesday, March 3, 2009 4:41:43 PM GMT -05:00 US/Canada Eastern Subject: Picture Book Mockup http://duffy.fedorapeople.org/collateral/picturebook/mocks/friendsmockup.png (SVG in same directory) Let the games begin! :) My concept for the theme of the book here is a guide on how to be Fedora. There would be 4 chapters, freedom, friends, features, first. The photos for each chapter will have the model's perspective on the chapter's four f, talking about how that f affects their life and affects their role in Fedora. Then below that, per picture, we could suggest to the readers how they can bring that into their own life with a suggestion. Kind of a call to action. What do you think? ~m ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list -- Colby Alexander Hoke -[Producer]- Brand Communications + Design ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Picture Book Mockup
Setting in critic mode: Did you use hyphen or em dashes in first and last paragraph? Careful with the widow at the end of last paragraph? Title Chapter 2: Friends is hard to read due to similar hue. Enlighten it might help. -- Luya Tshimbalanga Graphic Web Design E: l...@fedoraproject.org ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
