Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-29 Thread Luya Tshimbalanga
Quoting Martin Sourada [EMAIL PROTECTED]:

 On Wed, 2008-04-23 at 23:42 -0700, Luya Tshimbalanga wrote:
  Martin Sourada a écrit :
   PS: you might notice that I used wide-screen monitor and wireless
   keyboard... you know... first, it looks IMHO better and second, fedora
   is hi-tech, isn't it? :-D
  
  How about making the monitor thinner?
 
  Luya
 
 Yup, works well. I incorporated this and some of the other suggestions
 into another two variations, I attach PNGs, SVGs are on the usual place
 [1]. From my POV these two are final for the big version and we only
 need to choose one of them - with or without the tower? The one with
 tower looks IMHO a little crowded and the tower looks awful in small
 sizes (without size optimisation, but I think even optimisation would
 not do miracles...).

The complete desktop set works in large size for the installer in Fedora 10. The
computer without the tower fits perfectly. Make sure to widen the keyboard in
16x16 icon to avoid confusion with the single monitor.


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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-24 Thread Nicu Buculei

Martin Sourada wrote:

Following some of your suggestions I created 4 variations [1]. Firstly,
I added some depth to the monitor, so that it looks more massive,
secondly I made the monitor upright (I noticed my room-mate has a
similarly positioned LCD monitor). And now to the variations:


All of them are good, but some of them are, IMO, better:


a) trying smaller computer - easier to recognise the shape, but it feels
like something is missing...


This one is what I probably like the best. The feeling of something 
missing is probably due to the large distance between tower and monitor, 
I would try a more compact layout.



b) normal-sized computer, slightly changed position - better defined
shape than the original, looks better than with the smaller computer


The big tower steals my focus.


c) use keyboard+monitor - this one is my favourite, also has an
advantage of sharing the same metaphor with the same icon from gnome
icon theme [2]


I like it too. Maybe if the keyboard overleaps a bit the base of the 
monitor?



d) following Mo's suggestions - similar positioning like in bluecurve,
only with echo perspective


Here I feel like a lot of space is wasted.


I attach PNGs, SVGs are at fedorapeople [1]. I've created only 48x48
(time constraints). I will create other sizes when we decide which one
to use.

Thanks for your comments,
Martin

References:
[1] http://mso.fedorapeople.org/echo/
[2] http://people.freedesktop.org/~jimmac/icons/



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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-24 Thread Luya Tshimbalanga
Martin Sourada a écrit :
 PS: you might notice that I used wide-screen monitor and wireless
 keyboard... you know... first, it looks IMHO better and second, fedora
 is hi-tech, isn't it? :-D
   
How about making the monitor thinner?

Luya

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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Pavel Shevchuk
Looks nice imo. Screen color could be updated every release to reflect
color of default wallpaper (Apple does this) =)

2008/4/23 Martin Sourada [EMAIL PROTECTED]:
 Hi,

  I've just finished a draft of a reworked computer icon. I attach 48x48
  PNG version, the rest is at my fedorapeople page [1].

  Comments welcome,
  Martin

  References:
  [1] http://mso.fedorapeople.org/echo/

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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Nicu Buculei

Martin Sourada wrote:

I've just finished a draft of a reworked computer icon. I attach 48x48
PNG version, the rest is at my fedorapeople page [1].

Comments welcome,


Maybe the computer could be smaller (small form factor?) but my comment 
is about something else: on that page you have also an 
internet-web-browser icon, which is just a globe. Isn't that a bit too 
simplistic? Does a globe by itself represent the web browsing metaphor?



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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Martin Sourada
On Wed, 2008-04-23 at 13:30 +0300, Nicu Buculei wrote:
 Martin Sourada wrote:
  I've just finished a draft of a reworked computer icon. I attach 48x48
  PNG version, the rest is at my fedorapeople page [1].
  
  Comments welcome,
 
 Maybe the computer could be smaller (small form factor?) 
Hm... smaller computer? It might work. Perhaps it would make the icon
better recognizable in smaller sizes...

 but my comment 
 is about something else: on that page you have also an 
 internet-web-browser icon, which is just a globe. Isn't that a bit too 
 simplistic? Does a globe by itself represent the web browsing metaphor?
 
Well, usually there's a mouse-arrow or mouse included as well (like
there [1]), I am not sure if such metaphor would work nicely for Echo
too. But one never knows until he tries ;-)

References:
[1]
http://svn.gnome.org/svn/gnome-icon-theme/trunk/22x22/apps/web-browser.png



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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Martin Sourada
On Wed, 2008-04-23 at 13:24 +0300, Pavel Shevchuk wrote:
 Looks nice imo. Screen color could be updated every release to reflect
 color of default wallpaper (Apple does this) =)
 
Yup, it could, it's not that much of a work to add simple version of the
desktop wallpaper there.

Martin


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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread María Leandro
 think that's cool... but I dont think that the monitor perspective is
correctly formed.

I put this one a little more to the left.. like a smallers 20º or 30º

But the hole thing is so cool :D

2008/4/24, Martin Sourada [EMAIL PROTECTED]:

 On Wed, 2008-04-23 at 13:24 +0300, Pavel Shevchuk wrote:
  Looks nice imo. Screen color could be updated every release to reflect
  color of default wallpaper (Apple does this) =)
 

 Yup, it could, it's not that much of a work to add simple version of the
 desktop wallpaper there.


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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Máirín Duffy

Martin Sourada wrote:

Hi,

I've just finished a draft of a reworked computer icon. I attach 48x48
PNG version, the rest is at my fedorapeople page [1].

Comments welcome,


The problems I had always had with that icon are still there:

1) the monitor looks like it needs V8; it looks like it's tipping over 
backwards
2) I have never seen, in real life, a monitor placed that way up against 
a computer tower


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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Martin Sourada
On Wed, 2008-04-23 at 17:57 +0200, Mark wrote:
 2008/4/23 María Leandro [EMAIL PROTECTED]:
   think that's cool... but I dont think that the monitor perspective is
  correctly formed.
 
 
 I was thinking the exact same!
 The monitor is definitely out of perspective.. but nice to see a
 wide-screen in the computer icon ^_^
 
It's definitely NOT out of perspective but it's definitely strange.
Mathematically speaking, the points and the shape follows the isometric
perspective correctly, however to the eye of a beholder, who is used to
real word perspective, it looks odd.

 Also this suggestion:
 2008/4/23 Nicu Buculei [EMAIL PROTECTED]:
   Maybe the computer could be smaller (small form factor?)
 
 That would definitely be a unique icon and i think will look better as well.
 
  but my comment is
  about something else: on that page you have also an internet-web-browser
  icon, which is just a globe. Isn't that a bit too simplistic? Does a globe
  by itself represent the web browsing metaphor?
 
 Usually it's a globe icon or a globe with lines going over it.
You mistake category-internet for internet-web-browser there. It's two
different things.

Martin


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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Martin Sourada
On Wed, 2008-04-23 at 12:01 -0400, Máirín Duffy wrote:
 Martin Sourada wrote:
  Hi,
  
  I've just finished a draft of a reworked computer icon. I attach 48x48
  PNG version, the rest is at my fedorapeople page [1].
  
  Comments welcome,
 
 The problems I had always had with that icon are still there:
 
 1) the monitor looks like it needs V8; it looks like it's tipping over 
 backwards
It's hard to get rid of this feeling in the isometric perspective. No
matter how you try it always ends up looking like strange (I believe
it's because human brain is not used to isometric perspective and
interprets it wrongly in these cases), unless you place the monitor
upwards (which I tried to avoid).

 2) I have never seen, in real life, a monitor placed that way up against 
 a computer tower
 
Yeah, I've seen such set-ups but they are really rare, alas the place is
finite and if we go with monitor PLUS computer tower there doesn't to be
any better way of placing those.

 ~m
 

Anyway, I'll try to poke with the design a little more tonight and see
what I can do about these two issues.

Martin


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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Máirín Duffy

Martin Sourada wrote:
2) I have never seen, in real life, a monitor placed that way up against 
a computer tower



Yeah, I've seen such set-ups but they are really rare, alas the place is
finite and if we go with monitor PLUS computer tower there doesn't to be
any better way of placing those.


Sure there is, look at how it's done in bluecurve...

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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Martin Sourada
On Wed, 2008-04-23 at 13:26 -0400, Máirín Duffy wrote:
 Martin Sourada wrote:
  2) I have never seen, in real life, a monitor placed that way up against 
  a computer tower
 
  Yeah, I've seen such set-ups but they are really rare, alas the place is
  finite and if we go with monitor PLUS computer tower there doesn't to be
  any better way of placing those.
 
 Sure there is, look at how it's done in bluecurve...
 
I see, they use really small computer... Yeah, that might work, but at
smaller sizes the computer looks more like a smudge than PC...

Perhaps I'll try gnome approach (monitor + keyboard).

Stay tuned.

 ~m
Martin


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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Máirín Duffy

Martin Sourada wrote:

On Wed, 2008-04-23 at 13:26 -0400, Máirín Duffy wrote:

Martin Sourada wrote:
2) I have never seen, in real life, a monitor placed that way up against 
a computer tower



Yeah, I've seen such set-ups but they are really rare, alas the place is
finite and if we go with monitor PLUS computer tower there doesn't to be
any better way of placing those.

Sure there is, look at how it's done in bluecurve...


I see, they use really small computer... Yeah, that might work, but at
smaller sizes the computer looks more like a smudge than PC...

Perhaps I'll try gnome approach (monitor + keyboard).


At smaller sizes you could remove the monitor and just use the computer

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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread María Leandro
2008/4/24, Máirín Duffy [EMAIL PROTECTED]:

 Martin Sourada wrote:

  On Wed, 2008-04-23 at 13:26 -0400, Máirín Duffy wrote:
 
   Martin Sourada wrote:
  
2) I have never seen, in real life, a monitor placed that way up
 against a computer tower
   
   
LOL... I DO have my monitor places against the tower :$

and I think that you should keep the monitor... only fix the perspective..
the tower AND the monitor are part of the computer :D

Yeah, I've seen such set-ups but they are really rare, alas the place is
finite and if we go with monitor PLUS computer tower there doesn't
to be
any better way of placing those.
   
   Sure there is, look at how it's done in bluecurve...
  
I see, they use really small computer... Yeah, that might work, but
  at
  smaller sizes the computer looks more like a smudge than PC...
 
  Perhaps I'll try gnome approach (monitor + keyboard).
 

 At smaller sizes you could remove the monitor and just use the computer

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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Martin Sourada
Following some of your suggestions I created 4 variations [1]. Firstly,
I added some depth to the monitor, so that it looks more massive,
secondly I made the monitor upright (I noticed my room-mate has a
similarly positioned LCD monitor). And now to the variations:

a) trying smaller computer - easier to recognise the shape, but it feels
like something is missing...
b) normal-sized computer, slightly changed position - better defined
shape than the original, looks better than with the smaller computer
c) use keyboard+monitor - this one is my favourite, also has an
advantage of sharing the same metaphor with the same icon from gnome
icon theme [2]
d) following Mo's suggestions - similar positioning like in bluecurve,
only with echo perspective

I attach PNGs, SVGs are at fedorapeople [1]. I've created only 48x48
(time constraints). I will create other sizes when we decide which one
to use.

Thanks for your comments,
Martin

References:
[1] http://mso.fedorapeople.org/echo/
[2] http://people.freedesktop.org/~jimmac/icons/

PS: you might notice that I used wide-screen monitor and wireless
keyboard... you know... first, it looks IMHO better and second, fedora
is hi-tech, isn't it? :-D


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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Martin Sourada
On Thu, 2008-04-24 at 14:02 +, =?ISO-8859-1?Q? Mar=EDa_Leandro _
wrote:
 
 LOL... I DO have my monitor places against the tower :$ 
 
 and I think that you should keep the monitor... only fix the
 perspective.. the tower AND the monitor are part of the computer :D
 

Not necessarily, I believe some MACs have the HW integrated in the 
monitor, so no tower is needed :-D

Martin


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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Pavel Shevchuk
On 4/23/08, Máirín Duffy [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:
 Martin Sourada wrote:

  Hi,
 
  I've just finished a draft of a reworked computer icon. I attach 48x48
  PNG version, the rest is at my fedorapeople page [1].
 
  Comments welcome,
 

  The problems I had always had with that icon are still there:

  1) the monitor looks like it needs V8; it looks like it's tipping over
 backwards
  2) I have never seen, in real life, a monitor placed that way up against a
 computer tower

Mo, you're welcome to visit my flat anytime to see such (practical)
desk layout in real life =)
Photo: http://stalwart.fedorapeople.org/tmp/stalwart_desk_delta.jpg

P.S. I like this icon even more now =)


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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Máirín Duffy

Pavel Shevchuk wrote:

On 4/23/08, Máirín Duffy [EMAIL PROTECTED] wrote:

Martin Sourada wrote:


Hi,

I've just finished a draft of a reworked computer icon. I attach 48x48
PNG version, the rest is at my fedorapeople page [1].

Comments welcome,


 The problems I had always had with that icon are still there:

 1) the monitor looks like it needs V8; it looks like it's tipping over
backwards
 2) I have never seen, in real life, a monitor placed that way up against a
computer tower


Mo, you're welcome to visit my flat anytime to see such (practical)
desk layout in real life =)
Photo: http://stalwart.fedorapeople.org/tmp/stalwart_desk_delta.jpg

P.S. I like this icon even more now =)


Well that's great.

I've never before seen that in practice. Why? Because, most people like 
having desk space so they keep the tower under their desk, and it's also 
far easier to access to the CD drive and USB ports when the system's 
front is facing you.


~m

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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Grady Laksmono
It looks really nice, I like it :)

- Grady

2008/4/23 Martin Sourada [EMAIL PROTECTED]:
 Hi,

  I've just finished a draft of a reworked computer icon. I attach 48x48
  PNG version, the rest is at my fedorapeople page [1].

  Comments welcome,
  Martin

  References:
  [1] http://mso.fedorapeople.org/echo/

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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Gian Paolo Mureddu




2) I have never seen, in real life, a monitor placed that way up 
against a computer tower


~m


Interesting, my main computer is arranged like that (more for space 
reasons than anything)


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Re: [Echo] new computer icon draft

2008-04-23 Thread Luya Tshimbalanga
The layout is nice. I think about some IMac or custom PC that integrate USB and
optic media in the back of monitor. The widescreen monitor may be suitable for
other icons that use it. I wonder if a metallic silver tower works.


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