Re: Updated EDU SIG Artwork Request
María Leandro wrote: Updated. http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3a.png http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3b.png http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3c.png I think there is still some room for improvement, hope you don't mind (I got a few colleagues upset with my direct criticism at a photography course I am taking these days): - the rays of light are under the main circle of the sun but above its rays, I think they should be under both; - the yellow pencil has a shadow falling on the blue pencil and the blue pencil has a shadow falling over the magenta one but those shadows wall in a direction opposing the direction of the light. Other than that, my preference is for one of the first two images, having the pencils as a metaphor for education (the enlightenment from the light rays is also a good metaphor, but not so in your face). -- nicu :: http://nicubunu.ro :: http://nicubunu.blogspot.com Cool Fedora wallpapers: http://fedora.nicubunu.ro/wallpapers/ Open Clip Art Library: http://www.openclipart.org my Fedora stuff: http://fedora.nicubunu.ro ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Updated EDU SIG Artwork Request
Nicu Buculei wrote: María Leandro wrote: Updated. http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3a.png http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3b.png http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3c.png I think there is still some room for improvement, hope you don't mind (I got a few colleagues upset with my direct criticism at a photography course I am taking these days): - the rays of light are under the main circle of the sun but above its rays, I think they should be under both; - the yellow pencil has a shadow falling on the blue pencil and the blue pencil has a shadow falling over the magenta one but those shadows wall in a direction opposing the direction of the light. Other than that, my preference is for one of the first two images, having the pencils as a metaphor for education (the enlightenment from the light rays is also a good metaphor, but not so in your face). Yeah, I agree! I really like the first and the second one, though I'm still not sure, which one more - I like both. Thanks again! :) --Sebastian ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Updated EDU SIG Artwork Request
Updated. http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3a.png http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3b.png http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3c.png 2009/1/23 Nicu Buculei nicu_fed...@nicubunu.ro Máirín Duffy wrote: María Leandro wrote: http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper2.jpg http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3.jpg Me too, my favorite is wallpaper 3. Me too :p It is much stronger than the other A couple quick comments: - I would take the outline that is around the infinity symbol in the Fedora logo out. You want to make sure you are using the logo according to the usage guidelines [1] which prohibit this kind of treatment. I saw that coming... - Instead of using a specialized font for the EDU, I would maybe just write out Education in MgOpen Modata. It would fit in nicely with our secondary branding scheme then. I love the bright colors and I also like how the focus of the graphics is on the lower right, although maybe this graphic is too busy for a wallpaper. I think it would be really nice for splashes and other branding materials though, and maybe you could pull out the pencils/sun and just have a slightly desaturated version of the sky+clouds for the wallpaper? And pay more attention to the light source and direction. Your primary light source is the sun, so it think: - pencil shadows on the ground should be directed to the down-left; - the pencil shadows on the other pencils should go the opposite way; - the light rays should originate from the sun, not from the ground. -- nicu :: http://nicubunu.ro :: http://nicubunu.blogspot.com Cool Fedora wallpapers: http://fedora.nicubunu.ro/wallpapers/ Open Clip Art Library: http://www.openclipart.org my Fedora stuff: http://fedora.nicubunu.ro ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list -- tatica Maria Gracia Leandro http://www.tatica.org http://www.iseit.net http://www.latinux.org http://www.latinux.com http://www.fedora-ve.org http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MariaLeandro LinuxUser= 440285 GPG Public Key: E1CDCC56 Be yourself... Don't be anyone else ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Updated EDU SIG Artwork Request
Hello again. This afternoon I had some ideas for the Artwork, and this two thing came up... only a sketch. http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper2.jpg http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3.jpg 2009/1/18 María Leandro tat...@fedoraproject.org 2009/1/18 Sebastian Dziallas sebast...@when.com Hi there, I've recently updated the Education SIG's request here [1], since we were discussing it in our last meeting. Since we've been shifting the target group of our spin around, we're now targeting students with an age of 12 (as well as teachers, etc.). I was thinking of probably having a wallpaper, which wouldn't be too childish, but maybe have an reference to science or the world itself. Concerning the wiki banner: Maria, can we use the one you created? --Sebastian [1] https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/DesignService#Fedora_Education ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list Sure! I'll be back of vacations this monday; (so I'll be able to do more draws :D) -- tatica Maria Gracia Leandro http://www.tatica.org http://www.iseit.net http://www.latinux.org http://www.latinux.com http://www.fedora-ve.org http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MariaLeandro LinuxUser= 440285 GPG Public Key: E1CDCC56 Be yourself... Don't be anyone else -- tatica Maria Gracia Leandro http://www.tatica.org http://www.iseit.net http://www.latinux.org http://www.latinux.com http://www.fedora-ve.org http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MariaLeandro LinuxUser= 440285 GPG Public Key: E1CDCC56 Be yourself... Don't be anyone else ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Updated EDU SIG Artwork Request
María Leandro wrote: Hello again. This afternoon I had some ideas for the Artwork, and this two thing came up... only a sketch. http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper2.jpg http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3.jpg Hi and thanks for all your work! I do really like the second one (wallpaper3)... :) --Sebastian 2009/1/18 María Leandro tat...@fedoraproject.org mailto:tat...@fedoraproject.org 2009/1/18 Sebastian Dziallas sebast...@when.com mailto:sebast...@when.com Hi there, I've recently updated the Education SIG's request here [1], since we were discussing it in our last meeting. Since we've been shifting the target group of our spin around, we're now targeting students with an age of 12 (as well as teachers, etc.). I was thinking of probably having a wallpaper, which wouldn't be too childish, but maybe have an reference to science or the world itself. Concerning the wiki banner: Maria, can we use the one you created? --Sebastian [1] https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/DesignService#Fedora_Education ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com mailto:Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list Sure! I'll be back of vacations this monday; (so I'll be able to do more draws :D) [...] snip! ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Updated EDU SIG Artwork Request
Máirín Duffy wrote: María Leandro wrote: http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper2.jpg http://tatica.fedorapeople.org/EduSig/thumb_wallpaper3.jpg Me too, my favorite is wallpaper 3. Me too :p It is much stronger than the other A couple quick comments: - I would take the outline that is around the infinity symbol in the Fedora logo out. You want to make sure you are using the logo according to the usage guidelines [1] which prohibit this kind of treatment. I saw that coming... - Instead of using a specialized font for the EDU, I would maybe just write out Education in MgOpen Modata. It would fit in nicely with our secondary branding scheme then. I love the bright colors and I also like how the focus of the graphics is on the lower right, although maybe this graphic is too busy for a wallpaper. I think it would be really nice for splashes and other branding materials though, and maybe you could pull out the pencils/sun and just have a slightly desaturated version of the sky+clouds for the wallpaper? And pay more attention to the light source and direction. Your primary light source is the sun, so it think: - pencil shadows on the ground should be directed to the down-left; - the pencil shadows on the other pencils should go the opposite way; - the light rays should originate from the sun, not from the ground. -- nicu :: http://nicubunu.ro :: http://nicubunu.blogspot.com Cool Fedora wallpapers: http://fedora.nicubunu.ro/wallpapers/ Open Clip Art Library: http://www.openclipart.org my Fedora stuff: http://fedora.nicubunu.ro ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
Re: Updated EDU SIG Artwork Request
2009/1/18 Sebastian Dziallas sebast...@when.com Hi there, I've recently updated the Education SIG's request here [1], since we were discussing it in our last meeting. Since we've been shifting the target group of our spin around, we're now targeting students with an age of 12 (as well as teachers, etc.). I was thinking of probably having a wallpaper, which wouldn't be too childish, but maybe have an reference to science or the world itself. Concerning the wiki banner: Maria, can we use the one you created? --Sebastian [1] https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Artwork/DesignService#Fedora_Education ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list Sure! I'll be back of vacations this monday; (so I'll be able to do more draws :D) -- tatica Maria Gracia Leandro http://www.tatica.org http://www.iseit.net http://www.latinux.org http://www.latinux.com http://www.fedora-ve.org http://fedoraproject.org/wiki/MariaLeandro LinuxUser= 440285 GPG Public Key: E1CDCC56 Be yourself... Don't be anyone else ___ Fedora-art-list mailing list Fedora-art-list@redhat.com http://www.redhat.com/mailman/listinfo/fedora-art-list
