The anime never really took advantage of or explored Minako's past, did
it? I mean, beyond those one or two episodes in the first season, I
don't think her being Sailor V or having lived in England ever really
got mentioned.
Right. The only instance in which Minako's time in England is EVER addressed
is the original two-volume Codename wa Sailor V manga.
No, love, Timothy replied, holding her close. You know that you're
the
most important thing in the world to me. I'd be here even if it meant
losing
my job and living out of bins.
Timothy (aside): ...she can't check that, right?
*snrk*
She nodded and pocketed the card. I have to go now. Mum's probably
taking a
fit.
taking a fit? British-ism?
Well, yes. After all, England and all...this incarnation of Minako is
half-Japanese, half-British.
Mamoru's, then glanced at her new fiance briefly before casting her eyes
away. Please follow me, she said softly. The older boy followed
without a
word.
Interesting set-up for their relationship.
If you can call it that.
thoughtfully for a moment. Well, the one thing I've always wanted was
to be
a bride, and to have a beautiful wedding.
Sadly, canon. Usagi really was spectacularly shallow at the beginning...
Yeah.
Picking up a black pen, she carefully penned the name of her new
favourite
client into her notebook:
Timothy S. Arturo
Naughty boy.
You have NO IDEA.
legend. The enemy that once laid waste to a dozen worlds has returned.
Much
weaker, yes. But they cannot be allowed to gain power. He eyed her
intently. That's where you come in.
A dozen. Hmm. Got the nine standard... count the Moon for ten... the
usual asteroid belt former planet, eleven... and Nemesis, twelve?
Sore wa...
bridge overlooking a sizeable park with a lake in the centre. He leaned
his
bike against the railing and frowned. It might be--I might have found
it
this time. The maboroshi no ginzuishou...
Hrm. I'd probably capitalize maboroshi no ginzuishou, but of course
that's only a suggestion.
I thought about it, but decided it really works better this way.
watched people pass by as she sipped her juice, enjoying the
not-terribly-unpleasant evening breeze. A few cars passed, and there was
a g
uy on a motorcycle over there.
I see guy broken up by a newline.
The newlines are a problem with your mail parser. They don't exist in either
the original story copy or the message as posted.
I've found you at last, Princess Serenity, the panther rumbled in a
deep,
throaty female voice, fangs glistening.
Usagi screamed.
Perfectly natural reaction...
Indeed.
Well, not much in the way of _useful_ comments from me, I suppose, but
oh well. It's an interesting start, and of course very well-written.
Now, on to the next chapter...
Thanks for the comments, and looking forward to the next batch. :)
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