https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=263324
--- Comment #3 from PauAmma ---
Comment on attachment 21
--> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=21
diff to add virtualization to synposis
>diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc
>b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc
>index 625462331d..f06cb706ca 100644
>--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc
>+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/bsdinstall/_index.adoc
>@@ -132,6 +132,7 @@ A 32-bit kernel can only use the first 2 GB of RAM.
> == Pre-Installation Tasks
>
> Once it has been determined that the system meets the minimum hardware
> requirements for installing FreeBSD, the installation file should be
> downloaded and the installation media prepared.
>+An alternative is to use virtualization
>(crossref:virtualization[virtualization,Virtualization]) which allows multiple
>operating systems to run at the same time without modifying any disk
>partitions.
I'd merge the repeated "virtualization" into one. Something like:
An alternative is to use
crossref:virtualization[virtualization,virtualization], which allows...
> Before doing this, check that the system is ready for an installation by
> verifying the items in this checklist:
>
> [.procedure]
>@@ -169,7 +170,7 @@ Since the possibility of selecting the wrong partition
>exists, always backup any
>
> +
> Disk partitions containing different operating systems make it possible to
> install multiple operating systems on one computer.
>-An alternative is to use virtualization
>(crossref:virtualization[virtualization,Virtualization]) which allows multiple
>operating systems to run at the same time without modifying any disk
>partitions.
>+Virtualization (crossref:virtualization[virtualization,Virtualization])
>allows multiple operating systems to run at the same time without modifying
>any disk partitions.
Same here, and I think I'd keep "An alternative...". Or maybe just keep the
added earlier mention and remove this one, not sure.
> . *Collect Network Information*
> +
> Some FreeBSD installation methods require a network connection in order to
> download the installation files.
>diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/zfs/_index.adoc
>b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/zfs/_index.adoc
>index 3f9a2a457d..0242b01a6c 100644
>--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/zfs/_index.adoc
>+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/zfs/_index.adoc
>@@ -488,7 +488,7 @@ The <> utility allows creating, destroying,
>and managing datasets
> [[zfs-zpool-create]]
> === Creating and Destroying Storage Pools
>
>-Creating a ZFS storage pool (_zpool_) requires permanent decisions, as the
>pool structure cannot change after creation.
>+Creating a ZFS storage pool requires permanent decisions, as the pool
>structure cannot change after creation.
> The most important decision is which types of vdevs to group the physical
> disks into.
> See the list of <> for details about the possible
> options.
> After creating the pool, most vdev types do not allow adding disks to the
> vdev.
>@@ -580,7 +580,7 @@ This can cause undefined behavior in applications which
>had open files on those
> [[zfs-zpool-attach]]
> === Adding and Removing Devices
>
>-Two ways exist for adding disks to a zpool: attaching a disk to an existing
>vdev with `zpool attach`, or adding vdevs to the pool with `zpool add`.
>+Two ways exist for adding disks to a pool: attaching a disk to an existing
>vdev with `zpool attach`, or adding vdevs to the pool with `zpool add`.
> Some <> allow adding disks to the vdev after
> creation.
>
> A pool created with a single disk lacks redundancy.
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