[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-28

[Roni Even]

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-04-08
IETF LC End Date: 2018-02-26
IESG Telechat date: 2018-05-10

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with one nit.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

In section 7 - "a new error type  SERVER_REFLEXIVE_CANDIDATE_ALLOCATION_FAILED
in Section 5.9." It is in section 5.10


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[Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-core-senml-14

[Roni Even]

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-core-senml-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2018-04-08
IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-30
IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-19

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: 


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