Re: [I2nsf] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt

2017-01-29 Thread Susan Hares
Thanks for catching that one.  sue


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 Original message From: Rakesh Kumar  
Date: 1/30/17  12:34 AM  (GMT-06:00) To: Susan Hares , 
i2nsf@ietf.org Cc: adr...@olddog.co.uk, paulje...@skku.edu, 'Linda Dunbar' 
 Subject: Re: [I2nsf] FW: I-D Action:
  draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt 
Hi Susan,

Xiaobo Long had requested earlier that her name be removed from all 
publications since she did not get permission from her organization. I hope we 
can honor her request in the next edit you plan to do. The changes look good to 
me.

I really appreciate your hard work in making all these edits.

Regards,
Rakesh

On 1/28/17, 4:40 PM, "I2nsf on behalf of Susan Hares"  wrote:

    Linda and Adrian: 
    
    I believe captures all the edits and fixes all IDNITS in the draft.    One
    warning exists on line 872 for a tab that turns to 8 characters.  I cannot
    find the tab in the xml it is complaining about.   I've sent an email to
    Adrian that indicates the resolution of all comments (Adrian's,  David Qi,
    and Paul Jeong's).  I appreciate the detailed review by each of these
    people.  Since these are public comments to accept or not-to accept, I have
    published the edited version.  I rejected a few of Adrian's and Paul Jeong's
    edits - so I would like to ask Adrian, Paul, and my co-authors to verify you
    are good with all differences.    
    
    I do need Adrian to respond on 2 requested changes.   Therefore, there will
    be a version-08 on Monday. 
    
    Cheers, 
    Sue 
    
    -Original Message-
    From: I2nsf [mailto:i2nsf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
    internet-dra...@ietf.org
    Sent: Saturday, January 28, 2017 7:38 PM
    To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
    Cc: i2nsf@ietf.org
    Subject: [I2nsf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt
    
    
    A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
    directories.
    This draft is a work item of the Interface to Network Security Functions of
    the IETF.
    
    Title   : I2NSF Problem Statement and Use cases
    Authors : Susan Hares
  Diego R. Lopex
  Myo Zarny
  Christian Jacquenet
  Rakesh Kumar
  Jaehoon Paul Jeong
    Filename    : draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt
    Pages   : 27
    Date    : 2017-01-28
    
    Abstract:
   This document describes the problem statement for Interface to
   Network Security Functions (I2NSF) as well as some companion use
   cases.
    
    
    The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases/
    
    There's also a htmlized version available at:
    https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07
    
    A diff from the previous version is available at:
    https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07
    
    
    Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
    until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
    
    Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
    ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
    
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Re: [I2nsf] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt

2017-01-29 Thread Rakesh Kumar
Hi Susan,

Xiaobo Long had requested earlier that her name be removed from all 
publications since she did not get permission from her organization. I hope we 
can honor her request in the next edit you plan to do. The changes look good to 
me.

I really appreciate your hard work in making all these edits.

Regards,
Rakesh

On 1/28/17, 4:40 PM, "I2nsf on behalf of Susan Hares"  wrote:

Linda and Adrian: 

I believe captures all the edits and fixes all IDNITS in the draft.One
warning exists on line 872 for a tab that turns to 8 characters.  I cannot
find the tab in the xml it is complaining about.   I've sent an email to
Adrian that indicates the resolution of all comments (Adrian's,  David Qi,
and Paul Jeong's).  I appreciate the detailed review by each of these
people.  Since these are public comments to accept or not-to accept, I have
published the edited version.  I rejected a few of Adrian's and Paul Jeong's
edits - so I would like to ask Adrian, Paul, and my co-authors to verify you
are good with all differences.

I do need Adrian to respond on 2 requested changes.   Therefore, there will
be a version-08 on Monday. 

Cheers, 
Sue 

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Subject: [I2nsf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
This draft is a work item of the Interface to Network Security Functions of
the IETF.

Title   : I2NSF Problem Statement and Use cases
Authors : Susan Hares
  Diego R. Lopex
  Myo Zarny
  Christian Jacquenet
  Rakesh Kumar
  Jaehoon Paul Jeong
Filename: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt
Pages   : 27
Date: 2017-01-28

Abstract:
   This document describes the problem statement for Interface to
   Network Security Functions (I2NSF) as well as some companion use
   cases.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases/

There's also a htmlized version available at:
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07


Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.

Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/

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Re: [I2nsf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt

2017-01-29 Thread Adrian Farrel
Thanks for the work, Sue.

I'll take a look as time allows, but you're usually pretty reasonable so I doubt
there will be any issues.

Will also respond to your specific questions.

Adrian

> -Original Message-
> From: Susan Hares [mailto:sha...@ndzh.com]
> Sent: 29 January 2017 00:40
> To: i2nsf@ietf.org
> Cc: 'Linda Dunbar'; adr...@olddog.co.uk; paulje...@skku.edu
> Subject: FW: [I2nsf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt
> 
> Linda and Adrian:
> 
> I believe captures all the edits and fixes all IDNITS in the draft.One
> warning exists on line 872 for a tab that turns to 8 characters.  I cannot
> find the tab in the xml it is complaining about.   I've sent an email to
> Adrian that indicates the resolution of all comments (Adrian's,  David Qi,
> and Paul Jeong's).  I appreciate the detailed review by each of these
> people.  Since these are public comments to accept or not-to accept, I have
> published the edited version.  I rejected a few of Adrian's and Paul Jeong's
> edits - so I would like to ask Adrian, Paul, and my co-authors to verify you
> are good with all differences.
> 
> I do need Adrian to respond on 2 requested changes.   Therefore, there will
> be a version-08 on Monday.
> 
> Cheers,
> Sue
> 
> -Original Message-
> From: I2nsf [mailto:i2nsf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of
> internet-dra...@ietf.org
> Sent: Saturday, January 28, 2017 7:38 PM
> To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org
> Cc: i2nsf@ietf.org
> Subject: [I2nsf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Interface to Network Security Functions of
> the IETF.
> 
> Title   : I2NSF Problem Statement and Use cases
> Authors : Susan Hares
>   Diego R. Lopex
>   Myo Zarny
>   Christian Jacquenet
>   Rakesh Kumar
>   Jaehoon Paul Jeong
>   Filename: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt
>   Pages   : 27
>   Date: 2017-01-28
> 
> Abstract:
>This document describes the problem statement for Interface to
>Network Security Functions (I2NSF) as well as some companion use
>cases.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases/
> 
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07
> 
> 
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> 
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