Re: [I2nsf] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt
Thanks for catching that one. sue Sent via the Samsung Galaxy S7 edge, an AT 4G LTE smartphone Original message From: Rakesh KumarDate: 1/30/17 12:34 AM (GMT-06:00) To: Susan Hares , i2nsf@ietf.org Cc: adr...@olddog.co.uk, paulje...@skku.edu, 'Linda Dunbar' Subject: Re: [I2nsf] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt Hi Susan, Xiaobo Long had requested earlier that her name be removed from all publications since she did not get permission from her organization. I hope we can honor her request in the next edit you plan to do. The changes look good to me. I really appreciate your hard work in making all these edits. Regards, Rakesh On 1/28/17, 4:40 PM, "I2nsf on behalf of Susan Hares" wrote: Linda and Adrian: I believe captures all the edits and fixes all IDNITS in the draft. One warning exists on line 872 for a tab that turns to 8 characters. I cannot find the tab in the xml it is complaining about. I've sent an email to Adrian that indicates the resolution of all comments (Adrian's, David Qi, and Paul Jeong's). I appreciate the detailed review by each of these people. Since these are public comments to accept or not-to accept, I have published the edited version. I rejected a few of Adrian's and Paul Jeong's edits - so I would like to ask Adrian, Paul, and my co-authors to verify you are good with all differences. I do need Adrian to respond on 2 requested changes. Therefore, there will be a version-08 on Monday. Cheers, Sue -Original Message- From: I2nsf [mailto:i2nsf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of internet-dra...@ietf.org Sent: Saturday, January 28, 2017 7:38 PM To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org Cc: i2nsf@ietf.org Subject: [I2nsf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Interface to Network Security Functions of the IETF. Title : I2NSF Problem Statement and Use cases Authors : Susan Hares Diego R. Lopex Myo Zarny Christian Jacquenet Rakesh Kumar Jaehoon Paul Jeong Filename : draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt Pages : 27 Date : 2017-01-28 Abstract: This document describes the problem statement for Interface to Network Security Functions (I2NSF) as well as some companion use cases. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases/ There's also a htmlized version available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ ___ I2nsf mailing list I2nsf@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf ___ I2nsf mailing list I2nsf@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf ___ I2nsf mailing list I2nsf@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf ___ I2nsf mailing list I2nsf@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf
Re: [I2nsf] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt
Hi Susan, Xiaobo Long had requested earlier that her name be removed from all publications since she did not get permission from her organization. I hope we can honor her request in the next edit you plan to do. The changes look good to me. I really appreciate your hard work in making all these edits. Regards, Rakesh On 1/28/17, 4:40 PM, "I2nsf on behalf of Susan Hares"wrote: Linda and Adrian: I believe captures all the edits and fixes all IDNITS in the draft.One warning exists on line 872 for a tab that turns to 8 characters. I cannot find the tab in the xml it is complaining about. I've sent an email to Adrian that indicates the resolution of all comments (Adrian's, David Qi, and Paul Jeong's). I appreciate the detailed review by each of these people. Since these are public comments to accept or not-to accept, I have published the edited version. I rejected a few of Adrian's and Paul Jeong's edits - so I would like to ask Adrian, Paul, and my co-authors to verify you are good with all differences. I do need Adrian to respond on 2 requested changes. Therefore, there will be a version-08 on Monday. Cheers, Sue -Original Message- From: I2nsf [mailto:i2nsf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of internet-dra...@ietf.org Sent: Saturday, January 28, 2017 7:38 PM To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org Cc: i2nsf@ietf.org Subject: [I2nsf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Interface to Network Security Functions of the IETF. Title : I2NSF Problem Statement and Use cases Authors : Susan Hares Diego R. Lopex Myo Zarny Christian Jacquenet Rakesh Kumar Jaehoon Paul Jeong Filename: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt Pages : 27 Date: 2017-01-28 Abstract: This document describes the problem statement for Interface to Network Security Functions (I2NSF) as well as some companion use cases. The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases/ There's also a htmlized version available at: https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07 A diff from the previous version is available at: https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07 Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ ___ I2nsf mailing list I2nsf@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf ___ I2nsf mailing list I2nsf@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf ___ I2nsf mailing list I2nsf@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf
Re: [I2nsf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt
Thanks for the work, Sue. I'll take a look as time allows, but you're usually pretty reasonable so I doubt there will be any issues. Will also respond to your specific questions. Adrian > -Original Message- > From: Susan Hares [mailto:sha...@ndzh.com] > Sent: 29 January 2017 00:40 > To: i2nsf@ietf.org > Cc: 'Linda Dunbar'; adr...@olddog.co.uk; paulje...@skku.edu > Subject: FW: [I2nsf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt > > Linda and Adrian: > > I believe captures all the edits and fixes all IDNITS in the draft.One > warning exists on line 872 for a tab that turns to 8 characters. I cannot > find the tab in the xml it is complaining about. I've sent an email to > Adrian that indicates the resolution of all comments (Adrian's, David Qi, > and Paul Jeong's). I appreciate the detailed review by each of these > people. Since these are public comments to accept or not-to accept, I have > published the edited version. I rejected a few of Adrian's and Paul Jeong's > edits - so I would like to ask Adrian, Paul, and my co-authors to verify you > are good with all differences. > > I do need Adrian to respond on 2 requested changes. Therefore, there will > be a version-08 on Monday. > > Cheers, > Sue > > -Original Message- > From: I2nsf [mailto:i2nsf-boun...@ietf.org] On Behalf Of > internet-dra...@ietf.org > Sent: Saturday, January 28, 2017 7:38 PM > To: i-d-annou...@ietf.org > Cc: i2nsf@ietf.org > Subject: [I2nsf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt > > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Interface to Network Security Functions of > the IETF. > > Title : I2NSF Problem Statement and Use cases > Authors : Susan Hares > Diego R. Lopex > Myo Zarny > Christian Jacquenet > Rakesh Kumar > Jaehoon Paul Jeong > Filename: draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07.txt > Pages : 27 > Date: 2017-01-28 > > Abstract: >This document describes the problem statement for Interface to >Network Security Functions (I2NSF) as well as some companion use >cases. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases/ > > There's also a htmlized version available at: > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2nsf-problem-and-use-cases-07 > > > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > ___ > I2nsf mailing list > I2nsf@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf ___ I2nsf mailing list I2nsf@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf