Author: pierre Date: Mon Jan 4 10:14:21 2021 New Revision: 12083 Log: prologue slight rewrite and mainly change layout to the what is used in other books
Modified: branches/editor-manual-git/general.ent branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/bookinfo.xml branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/dedication.xml branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/legalnotice.xml branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/preface.xml Modified: branches/editor-manual-git/general.ent ============================================================================== --- branches/editor-manual-git/general.ent Mon Jan 4 09:57:08 2021 (r12082) +++ branches/editor-manual-git/general.ent Mon Jan 4 10:14:21 2021 (r12083) @@ -1,5 +1,8 @@ <?xml version="1.0" encoding="ISO-8859-1"?> -<!ENTITY version "20060516"> -<!ENTITY releasedate "May 16th, 2006"> +<!ENTITY year "2021"> +<!ENTITY month "01"> +<!ENTITY day "04"> +<!ENTITY version "&year;&month;&day;"> +<!ENTITY releasedate "January 4th, 2021"> <!ENTITY lfs-root "http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/";> Modified: branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/bookinfo.xml ============================================================================== --- branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/bookinfo.xml Mon Jan 4 09:57:08 2021 (r12082) +++ branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/bookinfo.xml Mon Jan 4 10:14:21 2021 (r12083) @@ -5,27 +5,36 @@ ]> <bookinfo> -<title>Linux From Scratch Editor's Manual</title> -<subtitle>Version &version;</subtitle> + <title>Linux From Scratch Editor's Manual</title> + <subtitle>Version &version;</subtitle> -<authorgroup> + <authorgroup> -<author><firstname>Gerard</firstname><surname>Beekmans</surname></author> + <author> + <firstname>Initial Version: Gerard</firstname> + <surname>Beekmans</surname> + </author> + <author> + <firstname>Git Version: Pierre</firstname> + <surname>Labastie</surname> + </author> -</authorgroup> + </authorgroup> -<copyright id="copyright"> + <copyright id="copyright"> - <year>2004</year> + <year>2004-&year;</year> <holder>Gerard Beekmans</holder> -</copyright> + </copyright> -<xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"; href="legalnotice.xml"/> + <xi:include xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2003/XInclude"; href="legalnotice.xml"/> -<abstract> -<para>This manual teaches you how to properly edit the LFS-Book.</para> -</abstract> + <abstract> + <para> + This manual teaches you how to properly edit the LFS-Book. + </para> + </abstract> </bookinfo> Modified: branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/dedication.xml ============================================================================== --- branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/dedication.xml Mon Jan 4 09:57:08 2021 (r12082) +++ branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/dedication.xml Mon Jan 4 10:14:21 2021 (r12083) @@ -7,7 +7,9 @@ <dedication> <title>Dedication</title> - <para>This book is dedicated to my loving and supportive wife - <emphasis>Beverly Beekmans</emphasis>. + <para> + This book is dedicated to all the LFS editors, who have maintained + the LFS project alive over all those years. </para> + </dedication> Modified: branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/legalnotice.xml ============================================================================== --- branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/legalnotice.xml Mon Jan 4 09:57:08 2021 (r12082) +++ branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/legalnotice.xml Mon Jan 4 10:14:21 2021 (r12083) @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ <legalnotice> -<para>Copyright (c) 2004, Gerard Beekmans</para> +<para>Copyright (c) 2004,&year; Gerard Beekmans</para> <para>All rights reserved.</para> Modified: branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/preface.xml ============================================================================== --- branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/preface.xml Mon Jan 4 09:57:08 2021 (r12082) +++ branches/editor-manual-git/prologue/preface.xml Mon Jan 4 10:14:21 2021 (r12083) @@ -5,20 +5,24 @@ ]> <preface id="preface" xreflabel="Welcome to the LFS Editor's Manual"> -<?dbhtml filename="preface.html"?> -<title>Welcome to the LFS Editor's Manual</title> -<?dbhtml dir="preface"?> + <?dbhtml filename="preface.html"?> + <title>Welcome to the LFS Editor's Manual</title> + <?dbhtml dir="preface"?> -<para>This manual will teach you all that you need to know in order to -properly edit the LFS-Book. It will cover some basic issues like accessing -Subversion over SSH and the Subversion commands you will use. It will also discuss -the proper sequence of doing things like upgrading a package and how to work with -the bug tracking database.</para> + <para> + This manual will teach you all that you need to know in order to + properly edit the LFS-Book. It will cover some basic issues like accessing + Git over SSH and the Git commands you will use. It will also discuss the + proper sequence of doing things like upgrading a package and how to work + with the bug tracking database. + </para> -<literallayout> + <literallayout> -- Gerard Beekmans ger...@linuxfromscratch.org -</literallayout> +Pierre Labastie +pie...@linuxfromscratch.org + </literallayout> </preface> -- http://lists.linuxfromscratch.org/listinfo/lfs-book FAQ: http://www.linuxfromscratch.org/blfs/faq.html Unsubscribe: See the above information page
