Re: [lfs-dev] few typos - its "it's" // it's "its" .

2014-03-20 Thread akhiezer
> Date: Thu, 20 Mar 2014 19:09:32 +
> From: lf...@cruziero.com (akhiezer)
> To: lfs-dev@linuxfromscratch.org
> Subject: [lfs-dev] few typos - its "it's" // it's "its" .
>
.
.
>  # For signals that do not expect a program to exit, simply
> -# let kill do it's job, and evaluate kills return for value
> +# let kill do its job, and evaluate kills return for value
>  


s/kills/kill's/





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Re: [lfs-dev] few typos - its "it's" // it's "its" .

2014-03-20 Thread Bruce Dubbs
akhiezer wrote:
>   - few small typos in lfs svn (as of r10511) per diff below.
>
> (Didn't include any of the further seven files under
> 'BOOK/stylesheets/lfs-xsl/docbook-xsl-1.78.1/' with instances of same/similar
> (re case) typo.)

Fixed in my sandbox, but I won't make a special commit for them.

Looking at the stylesheets, there are about 120 instances of "it's", but 
most are correct usage.

I don't really think we need to be concerned with grammar in internal 
comments.

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[lfs-dev] few typos - its "it's" // it's "its" .

2014-03-20 Thread akhiezer
 - few small typos in lfs svn (as of r10511) per diff below.

(Didn't include any of the further seven files under
'BOOK/stylesheets/lfs-xsl/docbook-xsl-1.78.1/' with instances of same/similar
(re case) typo.)


rgds,
akh



$ LC_ALL=C TZ=UTC0 diff -Naur lfs.svn.r10511 lfs.svn.r10511.czadj_excldocbk 
diff -Naur lfs.svn.r10511/BOOK/bootscripts/lfs/lib/services/init-functions 
lfs.svn.r10511.czadj_excldocbk/BOOK/bootscripts/lfs/lib/services/init-functions
--- lfs.svn.r10511/BOOK/bootscripts/lfs/lib/services/init-functions 
2014-03-20 17:38:48.0 +
+++ 
lfs.svn.r10511.czadj_excldocbk/BOOK/bootscripts/lfs/lib/services/init-functions 
2014-03-20 18:45:42.0 +
@@ -363,7 +363,7 @@
 fi
 
 # For signals that do not expect a program to exit, simply
-# let kill do it's job, and evaluate kills return for value
+# let kill do its job, and evaluate kills return for value
 
 else # check_sig_type - signal is not used to terminate program
 for pid in ${pidlist}; do
diff -Naur lfs.svn.r10511/BOOK/bootscripts/lfs/sysconfig/modules 
lfs.svn.r10511.czadj_excldocbk/BOOK/bootscripts/lfs/sysconfig/modules
--- lfs.svn.r10511/BOOK/bootscripts/lfs/sysconfig/modules   2014-03-20 
17:38:48.0 +
+++ lfs.svn.r10511.czadj_excldocbk/BOOK/bootscripts/lfs/sysconfig/modules   
2014-03-20 18:49:47.0 +
@@ -10,7 +10,7 @@
 # Notes   : The syntax of this file is as follows:
 #   [  ...]
 #
-# Each module should be on it's own line, and any options that you want
+# Each module should be on its own line, and any options that you want
 # passed to the module should follow it.  The line deliminator is either
 # a space or a tab.
 
diff -Naur lfs.svn.r10511/BOOK/chapter09/reboot.xml 
lfs.svn.r10511.czadj_excldocbk/BOOK/chapter09/reboot.xml
--- lfs.svn.r10511/BOOK/chapter09/reboot.xml2014-03-20 17:38:48.0 
+
+++ lfs.svn.r10511.czadj_excldocbk/BOOK/chapter09/reboot.xml2014-03-20 
18:27:05.0 +
@@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
 
 If you want to access your new system from a remote system
 within a comfortable GUI environment, install openssh and it's
+url='&blfs-root;/view/svn/postlfs/openssh.html'>openssh and its
 prerequsite, openssl.
 
$ 





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