Re: [lfs-dev] LFS Chapter 7

2014-04-22 Thread Sebastian Plotz
Am 21.04.2014 23:46, schrieb Bruce Dubbs:
 I have reorganized and rewritten Chapter 7.  I'd appreciate feedback.
 Thanks.

 -- Bruce

It looks really good. I have only three minor things to mention:

1)

Unfortunately some (in my opinion) interesting documentation got lost:

- |description of /etc/init.d/mountvirtfs|
- description of |/etc/rc.d/init.d/udev (it triggers coldplug, |unsets 
the uevent handler from the default of |/sbin/hotplug)
- the configfile |/etc/sysconfig/udev_retry is not mentioned anymore 
(associated with the *udevadm info --attribute-walk device command)

Would it be meaningful to include this documentation again somewhere?

2)

The is a typo in paragraph 7.5.2. Configuring the Network Interface 
Card at boot (systemd):

configuartion -- configuration

3)

It may should be mentioned that it is necessary to run systemctl 
disable ifupdown@eth0 before the procedure described under 7.5.3. 
Configuring the Network Interface Card for systemd-networkd can be used.
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Re: [lfs-dev] LFS Chapter 7

2014-04-22 Thread Bruce Dubbs
Sebastian Plotz wrote:
 Am 21.04.2014 23:46, schrieb Bruce Dubbs:
 I have reorganized and rewritten Chapter 7.  I'd appreciate feedback.
 Thanks.

  -- Bruce

 It looks really good. I have only three minor things to mention:

 1)

 Unfortunately some (in my opinion) interesting documentation got lost:

 - |description of /etc/init.d/mountvirtfs|
 - description of |/etc/rc.d/init.d/udev (it triggers coldplug, |unsets
 the uevent handler from the default of |/sbin/hotplug)
 - the configfile |/etc/sysconfig/udev_retry is not mentioned anymore
 (associated with the *udevadm info --attribute-walk device command)

 Would it be meaningful to include this documentation again somewhere?

 2)

 The is a typo in paragraph 7.5.2. Configuring the Network Interface
 Card at boot (systemd):

 configuartion -- configuration

 3)

 It may should be mentioned that it is necessary to run systemctl
 disable ifupdown@eth0 before the procedure described under 7.5.3.
 Configuring the Network Interface Card for systemd-networkd can be used.

Thank you.  I'll work these into my next update.

   -- Bruce

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