Re: [PATCH] docs: bhyve: style improvements

2020-10-07 Thread Andrea Bolognani
On Sun, 2020-10-04 at 06:29 +0400, Roman Bogorodskiy wrote:
>  - Wrap long lines in "domxml-to-native" example so it fits
>content width,
>  - For changeset revision links, use "FreeBSD changeset rN" or
>"changeset rN" instead of just "rN" to make it more readable.
> 
> Signed-off-by: Roman Bogorodskiy 
> ---
>  docs/drvbhyve.html.in | 24 ++--
>  1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

Reviewed-by: Andrea Bolognani 

-- 
Andrea Bolognani / Red Hat / Virtualization



[PATCH] docs: bhyve: style improvements

2020-10-03 Thread Roman Bogorodskiy
 - Wrap long lines in "domxml-to-native" example so it fits
   content width,
 - For changeset revision links, use "FreeBSD changeset rN" or
   "changeset rN" instead of just "rN" to make it more readable.

Signed-off-by: Roman Bogorodskiy 
---
 docs/drvbhyve.html.in | 24 ++--
 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/docs/drvbhyve.html.in b/docs/drvbhyve.html.in
index 2e58cc50e2..49d4aa5878 100644
--- a/docs/drvbhyve.html.in
+++ b/docs/drvbhyve.html.in
@@ -232,8 +232,8 @@ Then virsh console command can be used to 
connect to the text conso
 of a guest.
 
 NB: Some versions of bhyve have a bug that prevents guests from 
booting
-until the console is opened by a client. This bug was fixed in FreeBSD
-https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/262884;>r262884. If
+until the console is opened by a client. This bug was fixed in
+https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/262884;>FreeBSD changeset 
r262884. If
 an older version is used, one either has to open a console manually with 
virsh console
 to let a guest boot or start a guest using:
 
@@ -272,7 +272,9 @@ tweak them.
 
 # virsh -c "bhyve:///system"  domxml-to-native --format bhyve-argv --xml 
/path/to/bhyve.xml
 /usr/sbin/bhyveload -m 214 -d /home/user/vm1.img vm1
-/usr/sbin/bhyve -c 2 -m 214 -A -I -H -P -s 0:0,hostbridge -s 
3:0,virtio-net,tap0,mac=52:54:00:5d:74:e3 -s 2:0,virtio-blk,/home/user/vm1.img 
-s 1,lpc -l com1,/dev/nmdm0A vm1
+/usr/sbin/bhyve -c 2 -m 214 -A -I -H -P -s 0:0,hostbridge \
+-s 3:0,virtio-net,tap0,mac=52:54:00:5d:74:e3 -s 
2:0,virtio-blk,/home/user/vm1.img \
+-s 1,lpc -l com1,/dev/nmdm0A vm1
 
 
 Using ZFS volumes
@@ -416,10 +418,11 @@ Make sure you understand the risks associated with this 
feature before using it.
 Clock configuration
 
 Originally bhyve supported only localtime for RTC. Support for UTC time was 
introduced in
-https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/284894;>r284894 for 
10-STABLE and
-in https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/279225;>r279225 for 
-CURRENT.
-It's possible to use this in libvirt since 1.2.18, 
just place the
-following to domain XML:
+https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/284894;>FreeBSD changeset 
r284894
+for 10-STABLE and
+in https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/279225;>changeset 
r279225
+for -CURRENT. It's possible to use this in libvirt since 1.2.18,
+just place the following to domain XML:
 
 
 domain type="bhyve"
@@ -443,8 +446,8 @@ you'll need to explicitly specify 'localtime' in this 
case:
 
 e1000 NIC
 
-As of https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/302504;>r302504 bhyve
-supports Intel e1000 network adapter emulation. It's supported in libvirt
+As of https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/302504;>FreeBSD 
changeset r302504
+bhyve supports Intel e1000 network adapter emulation. It's supported in libvirt
 since 3.1.0 and could be used as follows:
 
 
@@ -497,7 +500,8 @@ be wired and cannot be swapped out as follows:
 
 Since 4.5.0, it's possible to specify guest CPU 
topology, if bhyve
 supports that. Support for specifying guest CPU topology was added to bhyve in
-https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/332298;>r332298 for 
-CURRENT.
+https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/332298;>FreeBSD changeset 
r332298
+for -CURRENT.
 Example:
 
 domain type="bhyve"
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2.28.0